Notes About The Poem

For the contest, 'what the world loves'

sponsored by Nette Onclaud

poem written on 26-June-2025

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Dancing in the rain

as a child again
spontaneous soul
sheds off thought flow chain
carefree, feeling whole
dances in the rain
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June 26, 2025 at 3:14 AM
How beautiful and brings back so many memories, the best iv had was swimming in the rain. Was fun and felt revived! Altho the tides were fierce. Pleasure reading your sweet and warm poem: sending you light always
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June 26, 2025 at 9:25 AM
Thanks, IE ~ Days of childhood were uninhibited and fun filled
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