Dancing In Stardust Ahead of the Dawn

Draped in the luster of glistened endeavors Evergreen silhouettes cast on the lawn Tracing our twilight enchanted encounters Dancing in stardust ahead of the dawn Firefly wishes on grapevine horizons Spider web tapestries spun through the trees Pine cone sonatas the key of our heartbeat You in my arms as the night wanders free Halos on moonbeams, the heavens a’ glimmer Beauty euphoric abloom in your eyes Lips warm and tender, a kiss in the darkness Love unrehearsed under crystalline skies Whispers symphonic 'pon breezes a’ flowing Softly their music sings sweetly above Drenching impassioned melodic embraces Here neath this canopy, bathed in our love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Vinson Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 5:23 PM
I ran all the known equations through the supreme central master paramount computer in the temple of the temporal limb gym, and what came out is that this Chris Green guy just has a lot of magic in him.
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November 30, 2016 at 5:34 PM
Ha, hopefully someday I'll get to meet this guy. :) Thanks Doug, that made me smile.
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November 29, 2016 at 6:23 PM
Hi Chris, Love this beautiful poem you have written here, I can just imagine Dancing in stardust, such a romantic piece, love the last verse especially the last line "bathed in our love", take care......Vera
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November 30, 2016 at 9:03 AM
Thanks so very much Vera for your wonderful comment on my poem. I am so happy you enjoyed this one.
Kasperyan Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 3:07 PM
The best time to dance? My favourite memory includes dancing at 4 am in a city centre! Pretty, pretty piece.
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November 29, 2016 at 3:09 PM
Thanks so much Leileah for your kind comment. That sounds like the perfect evening to me. I appreciate your visit to my poem.
Smith Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 6:57 PM
Loved this Chris, a fine poem. :)
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November 29, 2016 at 8:52 AM
Thanks so very much Gary. I am happy you enjoyed this one.
Wolf Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 6:52 PM
Whatever it is that works for you don't change it! It's always a great pleasure to read your poetry, Chris. Another gem my friend.
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November 29, 2016 at 8:51 AM
I think its beer so yes sir, I will not change it. :) Thanks so much my friend.
Teagan Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 6:22 PM
Chris, this is beautiful... talk about flow... this is so romantic and just lovely. Thank you for your visits to my page today, it is appreciated, and I'm glad because now I will know your poetry .
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November 29, 2016 at 8:51 AM
Well, I'm glad to, because your kind and encouraging comments are truly appreciated Rebecca and I too have found a wonderful new poet to read. Thank you so very much.
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November 28, 2016 at 6:05 PM
Oh how enchantingly beautiful this is. So very lovely, Chris
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November 29, 2016 at 8:49 AM
Thank you so very much Akkina for your nice comment. I am thrilled you liked this one.
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November 28, 2016 at 6:03 PM
You sound so in love and happy...So beautiful is this unrehearsed love...Chris.
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November 29, 2016 at 8:49 AM
Thank you Charmaine. I am happy most of the time or at least I act like it. :) I always appreciate your kindness my friend. Thank you always for your encouraging words for me. Your visits make me smile.
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