Dancing In My Jockeys

Dancing in my jockeys till the break of dawn So invigorating and joyful, like a lithe wee fawn Pirouettes and pliés Like a joyful ballet My troubles and strife are suddenly gone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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J.T. Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 8:09 PM
i take it you like to dance with abandon. Good poem -JT
Ellison Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 7:52 AM
I'm still dancing but not quite as agile as I once was!!! LOL
Smith Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 1:50 PM
Ladies watching with a grin...at the dancer looking thin...mouths aghast...at his mast...wondering whats on the menu for din
Ellison Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 3:59 PM
As I told Mr. John, down 33 lbs. since August!!!
Flats Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 8:33 AM
Well no wonder you slept in//dancing until you got thin//an all nighter//outta-sighter//no wonder troubles can't win. GOOD MORNING JACKSON!!!
Flats Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 5:53 PM
Just a shadow of your former self//though still larger than your average elf//good on you Jack//or is it "good off you? Ack!//The pounds are flying off the shelf. (twofer day - two silly comments for the price of one). btw, I found about 20 of those pounds you lost:-) in spite of massive biking and hiking.
Ellison Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 3:52 PM
Talking about getting thin... as of this a.m., down 33 lbs. since August!!!! YEE HAW!!!
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