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DANCING IN MY HEAD

My heart sings lines of poetry Inside my head I dance carefree The grass is cool between spry toes Serene adrift a purple rose Published in my mini photo/anthology ~DARK CLOUDS~ 2020 AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on August 19, 2019 for contest ARBITRIUM DIVISA 3 sponsored by GREGORY R BARDEN - excerpt from MY HEART SINGS - RANKED 8TH

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Date: 9/19/2019 6:33:00 PM
How lovely this is Line. Your imagery is divine! Congratulations on your much deserved win! xxoo : )
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Date: 9/19/2019 7:57:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie. Most appreciated.
Date: 9/15/2019 7:42:00 PM
I adore this one, LIne. BIG congrats on your well deserved win
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Date: 9/15/2019 11:31:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. Most appreciated.
Date: 9/14/2019 8:07:00 PM
Such beautiful imagery, Line, dancing on a light and airy rhythm. Your last line is especially stunning. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/15/2019 11:31:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan. Most appreciated.
Date: 8/21/2019 8:13:00 AM
Purple one of my very favorite colors. God's color. I love dancing and purple. You have harnessed magic. A day full of fun flowers falling from trees that fill your life with singing birds. Ann
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/21/2019 8:34:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Ann.
Date: 8/19/2019 9:57:00 PM
Fun!
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Date: 8/19/2019 10:11:00 PM
Thanks, Timothy.
Date: 8/19/2019 4:46:00 PM
Lovely, Line! Light as a feather, magical as dancing waters. Bravo! :) gw
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Date: 8/19/2019 6:52:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon. Most appreciated.
Date: 8/19/2019 9:55:00 AM
Love this! Good luck in the contest Line, xomo!
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Date: 8/19/2019 10:01:00 AM
Thanks, Maureen. Much appreciated.
Date: 8/19/2019 8:15:00 AM
so lovely Line. Serene adrift a purple rose opens a window for me.
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Date: 8/19/2019 10:07:00 AM
Thanks, Jeanne, for your much appreciated visit and comment.