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Dancing In My Head

My heart sings lines of poetry
Inside my head I dance carefree
The grass is cool between spry toes
Serene adrift a purple rose



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~DARK CLOUDS~ 2020

AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on August 19, 2019 for contest ARBITRIUM DIVISA 3 sponsored by GREGORY R BARDEN  -  excerpt from MY HEART SINGS  -  RANKED 8TH
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Marcum Wong Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 6:33 PM
How lovely this is Line. Your imagery is divine! Congratulations on your much deserved win! xxoo : )
Gauthier Avatar
September 19, 2019 at 7:57 PM
Thank you so much, Connie. Most appreciated.
Dietrich Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 7:42 PM
I adore this one, LIne. BIG congrats on your well deserved win
Gauthier Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 11:31 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. Most appreciated.
Ashley Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 8:07 PM
Such beautiful imagery, Line, dancing on a light and airy rhythm. Your last line is especially stunning. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Gauthier Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 11:31 PM
Thank you so much, Susan. Most appreciated.
Foster Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 8:13 AM
Purple one of my very favorite colors. God's color. I love dancing and purple. You have harnessed magic. A day full of fun flowers falling from trees that fill your life with singing birds. Ann
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August 21, 2019 at 8:34 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Ann.
Mcguire Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 9:57 PM
Fun!
Gauthier Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 10:11 PM
Thanks, Timothy.
Wolf Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 4:46 PM
Lovely, Line! Light as a feather, magical as dancing waters. Bravo! :) gw
Gauthier Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 6:52 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon. Most appreciated.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 9:55 AM
Love this! Good luck in the contest Line, xomo!
Gauthier Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 10:01 AM
Thanks, Maureen. Much appreciated.
Mcgee Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 8:15 AM
so lovely Line. Serene adrift a purple rose opens a window for me.
Gauthier Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 10:07 AM
Thanks, Jeanne, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
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