Dancing Floor

Sweet vibes coming from the speakers
As her skirt and blouse shine like gold,
Making my hairs stand like whiskers,
As I look at her ,inner feelings unfold,
I pull her to the dancing floor,
As her fragrance energizes me, 
Aroma of pure wine is the cure,
Beacons of light make my soul free,
As I dance closely with my dame,
Boredom and shyness are put to shame.

Olusegun Arowolo
Date:9-17-2015
CONTEST:Mixed senses sponsored by Nette Onclaud
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 2:33 PM
A heady mixture of all the senses... splendidly conceived with fine rhyming and smooth cadence. Well done! Keith
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 1, 2015 at 2:34 PM
...congrats on your win!
A. Sharma Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 2:05 AM
Wonderful imagery olusegun! Congrats on superb win!
Onclaud Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 3:59 PM
olu, you made my senses sway...enticing work quite sensual.. big congrats and thank you for gracing my contest.. huggs
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October 2, 2015 at 10:57 PM
Olusegun, Congrats on your "MIXED SENSES win" *****SKAT
Roper Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 7:35 PM
Congratulations on your win!! Wonderful write.
Callus Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 4:53 PM
This lovely imagery blends to form a romantic mood, Olusegun. The senses are captivated! Congrats on your fine win. // paul
Dietrich Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 4:36 PM
very nice, Olusegun. Congrats for your win.
Allison Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 3:42 PM
beautiful imagery Olusegun congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 11:47 AM
Very nice for the contest and thanks for visiting my poem, under green leaves ...
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