Dancing Dewdrops

The night was filled with mist
while sparkling-blue dewdrops hung in mid-air ready
to be kissed.

Lucent, they danced
in a celebration – heady,
entranced.

Ablaze
in a steady
haze.

The night was filled with mist
in a celebration – heady
haze.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Volumes Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 4:16 AM
Congrats dear Laf .. A wonderful Minichu.
Fowler Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 6:48 AM
There you are my friend! I hope all is well with you. Thanks for visiting with congrats! :)
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January 31, 2024 at 2:25 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K
Fowler Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 6:48 AM
You are welcome and thank you for the congrats Sara! :)
Poet Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 7:28 AM
Congratulations on your win dear, Linda.
Fowler Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 7:36 AM
Thank you Las. I hope you make your day a wonderful one. :)
Swan Avatar
January 29, 2024 at 8:09 PM
What beautiful night imagery :)
Fowler Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 7:19 AM
Thank you Jeanette! I appreciate your comment. :)
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January 29, 2024 at 6:20 PM
Linda, thanks for participating in my contest. enchanting imagery of sparkling dew drops in celebrating our lives in your Minichu. Congratulations for your placement. Wishing you best for New Year and times ahead. Mohan.
Fowler Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 7:18 AM
Many, many thanks dear Mohan. I enjoy writing this form of yours. I appreciate the contest and my placement! I delighted :)
Wolf Avatar
January 23, 2024 at 9:03 PM
Awesome title, Linda... Why am I reminded of the play 'Julius Caesar' by Shakespeare... and at the same time, 'The Martian Chronicles,' by Ray Bradbury? ~ Going Senile at the Speed of Light
Fowler Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 7:46 AM
LOL Thanks gw. I needed a little smile this morning. laf :)
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January 20, 2024 at 9:52 AM
Awww Dancing Dewdrops…love the Title L.O and love your misty, dreamlike poem….it has a lovely tranquil, peaceful feel to it! Debx
Fowler Avatar
January 22, 2024 at 9:52 AM
Hi dear Deb! Thank you for your kind comments! hugs xx LO. :)
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January 14, 2024 at 1:26 PM
well, i enjoyed the playful dance of words, besides the dancing dewdrops! so cute..thanks for your comments, and happy new year to you :)
Fowler Avatar
January 14, 2024 at 3:05 PM
Many thanks, and you are welcome, Charlotte. I hope your new year started, and continues, with happiness. throughout. :)
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January 13, 2024 at 10:44 AM
This is absolutely gorgeous dear Linda. Even the title is captivating. Beautiful imagery, ‘ sparkling- blue dewdrops’, Love it! Such artistically, skilful, crafted words seamlessly flowing and floating, dancing like the dewdrops in your delightful poem. An air of romance in the air. A joy to read. Hope you’ve had a great start to 2024. Hugs and smiles my friend xx :):)
Fowler Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 10:36 AM
So sweet of you to drop by dear Christina. I appreciate your thoughtful comments. I am so glad you enjoyed this poem. I am making 2024 a special year - hope you are too! hugs and smiles! :)
May Avatar
January 10, 2024 at 8:52 PM
I enjoyed your misty dewdrops poem Linda
Fowler Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 9:25 AM
Oh so many thanks dear Joseph I always appreciate your visits and comments. I am glad you enjoyed this. Thank you! :)
Volumes Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 10:30 PM
This is an amazing Minichu my friend. It flows perfectly- the last stanza just falls into place as an integral part of the poem. A shear delight to read, and that isn't easy considering the stringent constraints of this exacting form of poetry. Perfectly created Laf.
Fowler Avatar
January 9, 2024 at 10:17 AM
Your visit warms my heart dear Svvie! Thank you for the beautiful words about my dancing dewdrops minichu. :)
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January 7, 2024 at 11:18 PM
Loved the idea of dancing in the mist. A lovely poem.
Fowler Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 7:17 AM
Thank you dear Victor. hugs Linda :)
Bell Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 9:23 AM
This sounds like a great night.
Fowler Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 9:50 AM
Nice to see you here Paul. Thanks for visiting and commenting. A great night indeed, if you don't mind getting wet. :)
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