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Dancing Daffodils

In morning's soft light, Fields of gold sway and dance, free— Spring's gentle caress. Sun kisses each petal's cheek, Joy blooms in boundless expanse.

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/5/2024 4:48:00 PM

Your Tanka captures the wonderful essence of the beginning of spring with all its color and sound. Lovely imagery. I agree, joy blooms in boundless expanse. Spring is my favorite time of year. Just being outside, I feel energized. Enjoy this beautiful spring weekend, Sara PS Tankas are one of my favorite poetry forms...not too short, not too long. Just right

Don Iannone
Date: 4/5/2024 6:37:00 PM

Sara, you are so sweet! I love tanka for just the same reason. Enjoy! Cheers, Don

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/5/2024 6:33:00 AM

Hello Don, What a beautiful ode to the rejuvenating spirit of spring. Your imagery of fields ablaze with golden daffodils swaying in the morning light evokes a sense of serene beauty and renewal. I love how each line delicately captures the essence of nature's awakening, joy, and vitality. It reminds us to cherish the simple pleasures and embrace the beauty surrounding us. Well done! - Blessings, Daniel

Don Iannone
Date: 4/5/2024 6:58:00 AM

Daniel, thank you for reading and commenting on my tanka. I love springtime! Hope you are well. Cheers, Don