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Dancing Daffodils

In morning's soft light, Fields of gold sway and dance, free— Spring's gentle caress. Sun kisses each petal's cheek, Joy blooms in boundless expanse.

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Date: 4/5/2024 6:33:00 AM
Hello Don, What a beautiful ode to the rejuvenating spirit of spring. Your imagery of fields ablaze with golden daffodils swaying in the morning light evokes a sense of serene beauty and renewal. I love how each line delicately captures the essence of nature's awakening, joy, and vitality. It reminds us to cherish the simple pleasures and embrace the beauty surrounding us. Well done! - Blessings, Daniel
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Don Iannone
Date: 4/5/2024 6:58:00 AM
Daniel, thank you for reading and commenting on my tanka. I love springtime! Hope you are well. Cheers, Don

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