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Dancing At the Precipice

Ignoring our fate
we dance at the precipice
as the oceans rise.

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January 1, 2010 at 7:56 AM

So much truth in your words. Interesting perspective. Keep on writing! HAPPY NEW YEAR! Karen

Constance La France

December 28, 2009 at 6:11 PM

great visual with your few words,and thanks for your comment on my poem, How about tea, asked Mr. Dinsdale.. here is another tidbit from the book.. Mr Herriot at the farm for injections.. cush,cush, said Mr. Kay and me, cush cush, slapping hands on legs, the heifers stopped pulling the grass and regarded us with little interest, their jaws moving lazily, then they turned suddenly and made a dash down the hill, thundering past, tails high, kicking like mustangs, as we danced about

P Sheart

December 27, 2009 at 5:41 PM

Beautiful Haiku Sue! I have to sit and ponder on this a little bit, smile. Yes, well I can go many places with this!! Very thought provoking. Love it. Love Light Patty