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Dancing Arrows

There was a time of love beneath plantation trees, A time where I was young and beautiful and quite attached to the woman in the mirror, In fact I was doing just fine carrying her skin, Her leather-like skin breathing heavily beneath the Nevada sun, And there he was…. Then came the certain boy who smelled of rain, and faith, and pine trees, And we danced the night away with bare feet and our rhythm was rigid, For we were dancing arrows in the night, and we stood there… Attempting to escape the iron shells forever covering our metallic bodies. I thought my life would end when he went away, And I watched my lover steal the 30 year promise which held so closely to my skin. And I watched him pour fuel across streets before Paris ignited, I savored each cough as my lungs ate up the smoke and ash, I could feel him there.... Yes, I could feel him through the smoke. Goodbye Perry, goodbye Johnny, Goodbye to all, In fact, goodbye to me, who danced with Paul.

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Date: 2/15/2024 5:35:00 PM
So much emotion! Beautiful poem, Cristal.
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Cristal Aguilar
Date: 2/19/2024 1:47:00 AM
Thank you so much, Shane! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece, but thank you for taking the time to read this poem! - Best of wishes, from one poet to another.
Date: 2/12/2024 12:43:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Cristal Aguilar
Date: 2/12/2024 6:33:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words, and for the reminder of God's love that is expressed in John 3:16, I appreciate the kindness

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