Dancing

the tree limbs respond to the beckoning w i n d s . . . come dance with us awhile

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Paul Callus

Date: 6/13/2015 4:54:00 PM

What a beautiful haiku, David...and what a sweet invitation!! Dancing with the winds, how can one refuse:) #7 // paul

Daver Austin

Date: 4/20/2015 10:22:00 AM

Delicious tidbit. Congrats on the selection. daver

Eve Roper

Date: 4/5/2015 7:56:00 AM

Oh, you capture the moment that I was watching yesterday wind we had a slite wind, I thought of writing about it but you beat me to it. Blessings dear friend a 7 and a fav. Have a wonderful Happy Easter my friend Eve

Constance La France

Date: 3/23/2015 8:06:00 AM

David, you have captured the maple trees outside my window, I love the sound of the leaves rustling in the wind, wonderful write, a perfect 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, it snowed . . .

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/15/2015 9:49:00 PM

I love this David, this beckoning...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2015 6:14:00 PM

I can't believe I came to this exact one for the second time in a week. I am just crazy for this one.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/4/2015 2:24:00 PM

dang, I am short on time and can't seem to find a haiku or other poem that is new for me yet. Anyway, I really did like this one. It was one of your best.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 2/3/2015 7:08:00 AM

...in David's mead. Great.Love>rajat

Cynthia Jones

Date: 1/11/2015 2:55:00 PM

David, this is a beautifully penned Haiku. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia

David Meade
Date: 1/11/2015 5:24:00 PM