Dancing

the  tree  limbs  respond 
    to the beckoning w i n d s . . . come
dance with us awhile

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Paul Callus

June 13, 2015 at 4:54 PM

What a beautiful haiku, David...and what a sweet invitation!! Dancing with the winds, how can one refuse:) #7 // paul

Daver Austin

April 20, 2015 at 10:22 AM

Delicious tidbit. Congrats on the selection. daver

Eve Roper

April 5, 2015 at 7:56 AM

Oh, you capture the moment that I was watching yesterday wind we had a slite wind, I thought of writing about it but you beat me to it. Blessings dear friend a 7 and a fav. Have a wonderful Happy Easter my friend Eve

Constance La France

March 23, 2015 at 8:06 AM

David, you have captured the maple trees outside my window, I love the sound of the leaves rustling in the wind, wonderful write, a perfect 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, it snowed . . .

Kp Nunez

March 15, 2015 at 9:49 PM

I love this David, this beckoning...

Andrea Dietrich

February 10, 2015 at 6:14 PM

I can't believe I came to this exact one for the second time in a week. I am just crazy for this one.

Andrea Dietrich

February 4, 2015 at 2:24 PM

dang, I am short on time and can't seem to find a haiku or other poem that is new for me yet. Anyway, I really did like this one. It was one of your best.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

February 3, 2015 at 7:08 AM

...in David's mead. Great.Love>rajat

Cynthia Jones

January 11, 2015 at 2:55 PM

David, this is a beautifully penned Haiku. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia

David Meade

January 11, 2015 at 5:24 PM

Thank-you Cynthia for your kind and wonderful words. I enjoy reading your works and look forward to many more. Much love and light dear friend.