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Dancing

Dancing and laughing your way into our souls this very night
Standing still your bodies sway with emotion and innocence  
Leaving us breathless with your spirit that hovers above.

Copyright © Kristen Bruni | Year Posted 2011

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June 3, 2011 at 10:30 AM

Congratulations on your fine win in the contest, Kristen! Beautiful! Love, Annalise

Dr Hitendra Mehta

June 1, 2011 at 10:24 AM

Many congrats Kristen on notching up big win in ^Rick's contest with this beautiful imagery. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 1, 2011 at 6:36 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in ^Rick's Sijo contest Kristen. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

May 31, 2011 at 7:33 PM

This is really lovely, Kristen. I especially liked line one, "Into our souls" Congrats on the winners' circle,Kristen.

May 31, 2011 at 6:42 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest , kristen

Carrie Richards

May 31, 2011 at 4:44 PM

Nicely done, and such a love depiction of the photo! Congratulations!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 31, 2011 at 4:07 PM

Congrats Kristen on your HM in Rick's contest with this wonderful write from his photo my friend.. enjoy a special honor with luv..

April 12, 2011 at 3:22 PM

Enjoyed reading your work this eve...Good luck in the contest if for the contest..Sara

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