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Dances With Clouds

water glides lazily down the lake babbling like a child playing in the sun the air turns cold and water shivers with the chill it can stand the cold no longer, it rises and lands itself in a vapor heaven. water spirit finds shelter in the vapor, now she's a nymph in search of fun joins with the dust and debris from the earth flying in aimless abandon up in the sky where the air is frigid vapor nymph meets other nymphs they dance free-floating in space soar like an angel's song beyond the atmosphere their flight suspended above the planets to form into thin layers of clouds. clouds thicken into masses of tower clouds break up in spraying falls spawned by rain. water spirit goes back home to the lake.

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Date: 7/9/2015 6:40:00 AM
This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression.
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Josefina Costales
Date: 7/9/2015 10:42:00 PM
Thanks for the read. appreciate it
Date: 7/5/2015 1:14:00 AM
The third stanza is *especially* good for imagery. Best regards, Julia
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Josefina Costales
Date: 7/5/2015 11:01:00 PM
Thanks Julia, appreciate your encouraging reply

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