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Dancer

Daintily she prances.
Dancing on tippy toes.
Demonstrating divine
Delectable movement.
Designed to captivate.
Devotees of best ballet.
Dazzled by her brillance.

Copyright © Jean Murray | Year Posted 2016

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/2/2016 8:29:00 PM a charming one!! Congrats on the win. Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 10/21/2016 5:29:00 AM Just seeing this comment now Andrea. Thank you as always.

Kim Merryman Date: 9/1/2016 6:07:00 PM For some reason when I read this, I thought of little girl ballerinas. Wonderful description of a ballet dancer, Jean! Congrats on your 3rd place win! Blessings! Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 9/1/2016 6:10:00 PM Thank you Kim. I think it's the tippy toes that reminds us of childhood.

Paul Callus Date: 9/1/2016 11:23:00 AM I'm captivated by your dance routine and delectable movements, Jean:) Excellent Pleiades! Congratulations on this high flying win! Regards // paul Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 9/1/2016 11:57:00 AM Thank you Paul. I am flying high on hearing the news.

Laura Hay Date: 9/1/2016 9:28:00 AM Sweet little poem and congrats on your placement too, warm regards, Laura. Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 9/1/2016 11:55:00 AM Thank you Laura.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/1/2016 4:15:00 AM - A great ballet on "tippy toes", Jan :) - Congratulations on your placement in the contest, with this beautiful write :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 9/1/2016 5:09:00 AM Thank you Anne-Lise.

Kai Michael Neumann Date: 9/1/2016 4:00:00 AM Tippy toes, I love that diminutive. Congratulations, Kai Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 9/1/2016 5:09:00 AM Thank you Kia. I return the compliment.

Viv Wigley Date: 9/1/2016 12:28:00 AM Yaaay! Raise a glass, my cutey Colleen, well done! Viv x Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 9/1/2016 2:44:00 AM Thank you Viv. As we say in Gaelig YABBADABBADOO!!

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 9/1/2016 12:10:00 AM I love this entry Jean. I am working on my own little ballet dancer, my four-year-old granddaughter, she loves it! Congratulations on your win! 7 ; ) Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 9/1/2016 2:44:00 AM Thank you Connie. To love dance is a good sign in a child so young.

Beautiful Scars Date: 8/31/2016 7:55:00 PM Jean, congrats on your placement! :)-luloo Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 9/1/2016 2:43:00 AM Thank you Loloo. You too.

Arthur Vaso Date: 8/30/2016 11:28:00 PM If only I had blue suede shoes! Lovely! Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 8/31/2016 1:32:00 AM Pity. I could have been your Sandy in Grease Arthur. "Wait a minute......Stud!!"

Daniel Turner Date: 8/30/2016 7:30:00 PM This is really nice Jean. I suppose maybe a daughter has taken dance at one time or another. You certainly captured the feeling. Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 8/31/2016 1:30:00 AM No daughter so dainty as to dance as described Daniel.

Ilene Bauer Date: 8/30/2016 7:03:00 PM nice one, jean! love all those d's! Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 8/31/2016 1:29:00 AM Didn't deflate my dilated dome with this lovely comment Ilene.

Viv Wigley Date: 8/30/2016 6:53:00 PM ....and you kept your word and came up with a lovely Pleiades, Jean. Will do well, I'm sure, Viv x Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 8/31/2016 1:28:00 AM I just love the thrill of seeing the challenge 34 out of 35 Viv. A race against time. Missed it last time by the skin of my teeth.

Eve Roper Date: 8/30/2016 6:35:00 PM Oh... I love this one the only way I can dance is by myself so I won't step on no ones feet.... Good luck in the contest :) Hugs Eve Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 8/31/2016 1:25:00 AM Swan Lake on two left feet ? Best stick with rock and roll Eve.

Tim Smith Date: 8/30/2016 6:34:00 PM It is like I am watching you dance across the page Jean...lovely Login to Reply Jean Murray Date: 8/31/2016 1:22:00 AM That's so nice. Thank you Tim.