Dancer

Daintily she prances.
Dancing on tippy toes.
Demonstrating divine
Delectable movement.
Designed to captivate.
Devotees of best ballet.
Dazzled by her brillance.

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Andrea Dietrich

September 2, 2016 at 8:29 PM

a charming one!! Congrats on the win.

Jean Murray

October 21, 2016 at 5:29 AM

Just seeing this comment now Andrea. Thank you as always.

Kim Merryman

September 1, 2016 at 6:07 PM

For some reason when I read this, I thought of little girl ballerinas. Wonderful description of a ballet dancer, Jean! Congrats on your 3rd place win! Blessings!

Jean Murray

September 1, 2016 at 6:10 PM

Thank you Kim. I think it's the tippy toes that reminds us of childhood.

Paul Callus

September 1, 2016 at 11:23 AM

I'm captivated by your dance routine and delectable movements, Jean:) Excellent Pleiades! Congratulations on this high flying win! Regards // paul

Jean Murray

September 1, 2016 at 11:57 AM

Thank you Paul. I am flying high on hearing the news.

Laura Hay

September 1, 2016 at 9:28 AM

Sweet little poem and congrats on your placement too, warm regards, Laura.

Jean Murray

September 1, 2016 at 11:55 AM

Thank you Laura.

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 1, 2016 at 4:15 AM

- A great ballet on "tippy toes", Jan :) - Congratulations on your placement in the contest, with this beautiful write :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray

September 1, 2016 at 5:09 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise.

Kai Michael Neumann

September 1, 2016 at 4:00 AM

Tippy toes, I love that diminutive. Congratulations, Kai

Jean Murray

September 1, 2016 at 5:09 AM

Thank you Kia. I return the compliment.

Viv Wigley

September 1, 2016 at 12:28 AM

Yaaay! Raise a glass, my cutey Colleen, well done! Viv x

Jean Murray

September 1, 2016 at 2:44 AM

Thank you Viv. As we say in Gaelig YABBADABBADOO!!

Connie Marcum Wong

September 1, 2016 at 12:10 AM

I love this entry Jean. I am working on my own little ballet dancer, my four-year-old granddaughter, she loves it! Congratulations on your win! 7 ; )

Jean Murray

September 1, 2016 at 2:44 AM

Thank you Connie. To love dance is a good sign in a child so young.

Beautiful Scars

August 31, 2016 at 7:55 PM

Jean, congrats on your placement! :)-luloo

Jean Murray

September 1, 2016 at 2:43 AM

Thank you Loloo. You too.

Arthur Vaso

August 30, 2016 at 11:28 PM

If only I had blue suede shoes! Lovely!

Jean Murray

August 31, 2016 at 1:32 AM

Pity. I could have been your Sandy in Grease Arthur. "Wait a minute......Stud!!"

Daniel Turner

August 30, 2016 at 7:30 PM

This is really nice Jean. I suppose maybe a daughter has taken dance at one time or another. You certainly captured the feeling.

Jean Murray

August 31, 2016 at 1:30 AM

No daughter so dainty as to dance as described Daniel.

Ilene Bauer

August 30, 2016 at 7:03 PM

nice one, jean! love all those d's!

Jean Murray

August 31, 2016 at 1:29 AM

Didn't deflate my dilated dome with this lovely comment Ilene.

Viv Wigley

August 30, 2016 at 6:53 PM

....and you kept your word and came up with a lovely Pleiades, Jean. Will do well, I'm sure, Viv x

Jean Murray

August 31, 2016 at 1:28 AM

I just love the thrill of seeing the challenge 34 out of 35 Viv. A race against time. Missed it last time by the skin of my teeth.

Eve Roper

August 30, 2016 at 6:35 PM

Oh... I love this one the only way I can dance is by myself so I won't step on no ones feet.... Good luck in the contest :) Hugs Eve

Jean Murray

August 31, 2016 at 1:25 AM

Swan Lake on two left feet ? Best stick with rock and roll Eve.

Tim Smith

August 30, 2016 at 6:34 PM

It is like I am watching you dance across the page Jean...lovely

Jean Murray

August 31, 2016 at 1:22 AM

That's so nice. Thank you Tim.

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