Dancer

Daintily she prances. Dancing on tippy toes. Demonstrating divine Delectable movement. Designed to captivate. Devotees of best ballet. Dazzled by her brillance.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/2/2016 8:29:00 PM

a charming one!! Congrats on the win.

Jean Murray
Date: 10/21/2016 5:29:00 AM

Just seeing this comment now Andrea. Thank you as always.

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/1/2016 6:07:00 PM

For some reason when I read this, I thought of little girl ballerinas. Wonderful description of a ballet dancer, Jean! Congrats on your 3rd place win! Blessings!

Jean Murray
Date: 9/1/2016 6:10:00 PM

Thank you Kim. I think it's the tippy toes that reminds us of childhood.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/1/2016 11:23:00 AM

I'm captivated by your dance routine and delectable movements, Jean:) Excellent Pleiades! Congratulations on this high flying win! Regards // paul

Jean Murray
Date: 9/1/2016 11:57:00 AM

Thank you Paul. I am flying high on hearing the news.

Laura Hay

Date: 9/1/2016 9:28:00 AM

Sweet little poem and congrats on your placement too, warm regards, Laura.

Jean Murray
Date: 9/1/2016 11:55:00 AM

Thank you Laura.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/1/2016 4:15:00 AM

- A great ballet on "tippy toes", Jan :) - Congratulations on your placement in the contest, with this beautiful write :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray
Date: 9/1/2016 5:09:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 9/1/2016 4:00:00 AM

Tippy toes, I love that diminutive. Congratulations, Kai

Jean Murray
Date: 9/1/2016 5:09:00 AM

Thank you Kia. I return the compliment.

Viv Wigley

Date: 9/1/2016 12:28:00 AM

Yaaay! Raise a glass, my cutey Colleen, well done! Viv x

Jean Murray
Date: 9/1/2016 2:44:00 AM

Thank you Viv. As we say in Gaelig YABBADABBADOO!!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/1/2016 12:10:00 AM

I love this entry Jean. I am working on my own little ballet dancer, my four-year-old granddaughter, she loves it! Congratulations on your win! 7 ; )

Jean Murray
Date: 9/1/2016 2:44:00 AM

Thank you Connie. To love dance is a good sign in a child so young.