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Dance With Me

Dance with me.. Our hands held together As we glide across the floor.. In the shimmering moonlight.. Only the two of us.. Dancing the night away Our eyes meet Deeply.. We gaze into each others eyes Mesmerized.. Hypothesized.. Feeling in a trance.. Then.. Feeling a rush .. As we move gracefully Twisting and turning.. Our bodies swaying.. Connecting to the music.. The two of us are one .. With the music.. A glorious vibration.. All of my troubles have vanished.. Painful becomes.. Painless.. As my sorrows have slipped away.. Dance with me.. As this is the only moment that exists.. The two of us.. Shimmering moonlight.. Your gaze.. My gaze.. A magical trance.. An embrace.. Along a magical dance..

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Date: 6/17/2018 6:32:00 PM
Robertina, I applaud you, my friend, for penning this lovely romantic piece. The dance is so symbolic of the growing attraction between two people, hoping it will be the beginning of a budding affair and blossom into love. Artfully conceived and beatutifully written! Love it! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 5/21/2018 6:44:00 AM
This poem is a sweet expression of genuine love and longing..feels lyrical and charming..simple but touching.
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Robertina B.
Date: 5/21/2018 6:33:00 PM
Thank you so much for visiting, Vijay.. Greatly appreciated..
Date: 5/18/2018 11:04:00 AM
Nicely done , Robertina, a dance of enjoyment … Thank you for reading " The Old Elf Poet Awaits At the River's Edge ".. hugs Eve ~`*
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Robertina B.
Date: 5/21/2018 6:33:00 PM
Thank you so much for visiting, Eve!! Blessings to you..
Date: 5/16/2018 10:13:00 PM
Such an enchanting and uplifting poem, Robertina. I love the spirit and beauty of your graceful and exhilarating write. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Robertina B.
Date: 5/17/2018 12:03:00 PM
" Thanks so much, for your wonderful feedback and visit, Susan ".. You are so kind!!

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