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Dance Primrose Path
Dance merrily down pretty Primrose Path find hidden treasures a soul must have Throw caution on backs of butterfly wings fly off to where bluebirds sweetly sing. Primroses, charming dainty little things one of the first harbingers of spring Adorning the lanes and woods gracefully spellbinding beauteous scenery. Suffering loneliness, regret or pain dancing aids you to feel whole again Dancing on your feet, you dance in your heart in release of tensions joys will start. The path leads one to the most peaceful place filling both your heart and mind with grace You won't find riches, wealth or bright jewels those things are just acquired accruals. Find yourself and you shall win the battle of demon snakes that hiss and rattle Fear no one or seas of torrential wrath seek refuge from darkness of the past. Seek the magic that gives one an uplift then share it with others as a gift Bask in the fragrance of glorious blooms when dancing down Primrose Path you zoom.
29th March 2021

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Date: 4/5/2021 6:05:00 PM
Hello Belle ... nicely written and great to read positive poem that takes us on a butterfly journey - thanks Belle - Lindsay
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/5/2021 8:31:00 PM
Hi Lindsay, thank you for commenting so kindly... Belle
Date: 4/1/2021 4:12:00 AM
Good penning Belle, full of lovely rhyme and flow with real great imagery too. Blessings,Gordon
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/5/2021 8:29:00 PM
Thank you very much Gordon, I truly appreciate your comments ~ Belle
Date: 3/29/2021 7:36:00 PM
What a fabulous poem, Belle:-) Immensely enjoyed it!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/30/2021 3:54:00 AM
Thank you so much Edward, your encouraging comments are very much appreciated. Belle :-)
Date: 3/29/2021 3:24:00 PM
I enjoyed this fun poem. Very nice and inspiring, Belle :)
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/30/2021 3:52:00 AM
Thank you Heidi, so pleased you enjoyed the read... Belle :-)
Date: 3/29/2021 2:36:00 PM
Such an uplifting poem Belle, life had thrown us a curved ball with the loss of a dear friend so I could do with dancing down the primrose path at the moment, hugs jan xx
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/30/2021 3:50:00 AM
So sorry to hear of your loss Jan, sending deepest sympathy. Thank you for commenting so kindly on this poem. Hugs Belle xx
Date: 3/29/2021 11:23:00 AM
Hi Belle, What an uplifting write to read today; I might as well put my dancing shoes on to face down such an amazing path. I enjoyed the read. Well done. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/29/2021 11:33:00 AM
Hi Alexis, put on those dancing shoes, I will too and dance down the path with you. Have a great day as well :-) Belle
Date: 3/29/2021 11:02:00 AM
Enjoyable verse Belle, well written. Hope you're well Tom
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 3/29/2021 11:30:00 AM
Thank you Tom, all is well and hope it’s the same for you... Belle

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