Dance of the Sparrows

The Sparrows they dance 
They dance to a music
Soaring in time to the conductors baton
Flitting, diving they follow his movements
The song they create is beyond words, beyond sound
The Sparrows they dance
They dance to a music
The wind is their partner
as they whirl with the breeze
Together as one they swoop and soar
Overhead a smiling sun looks down
The Sparrows sing a wordless song
Of the simple happiness they feel
The Sparrows they dance
They dance to a music 

This is my favourite poem because it describes the amazing beauty of somthing as simple as the formation and synchronized movement of a flock of sparrows.
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September 14, 2026 at 9:32 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
March 4, 2024 at 8:31 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 5, 2016 at 4:14 PM
EMMA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Always with LUV -- LINDA--
A   Avatar
September 28, 2011 at 8:50 AM
Emma, ( again ) * here is another contest I did not congratulate..., stopping by AGAIN to give warm congratulations on my old contest. Sorry, I forgot to leave you a thank you *comment* of appreciation~ I hope you don't mind my copy paste congratulations.. Don't worry I have read this many times. lol. or how else would have I closed it with out reading. Can you accept my apology and old congrats on your poem. .p.d. the late bloomer
Brown Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 3:11 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest of P.D. "Your (OWN) Favorite Poem" Emma. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 7:05 PM
Congrats Emma on a wonderful win with this awesome poem being your favorite one luv..
Mehta Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 12:44 PM
Congratultions on the win in the contest of P.D., Emma
Quigley Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 12:02 PM
Well done Emma. Congratulations on your win
Brown Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 9:44 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Emma. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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