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Dance of a Heart

Politely, you take hold of my hand Together, we tried to be on land You are leading the command as we sway for some fun... I catch your diamond stare I did not see any glare. Rather, I feel something flare. Persons around, yells, "we could be a pair..." We round-and-round unto the floor Not wanting to stop the music Requesting for more. My heart seems to sing and soar For I feel it right through my core... © O. E. Guillermo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/26/2014 9:16:00 AM
you sure danced beautiful in this piece olive
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/26/2014 7:56:00 PM
:) thanks
Date: 10/16/2014 2:01:00 PM
A touch of romance, fragrance, smooching dance, take that chance, James :)
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James Fraser
Date: 10/17/2014 11:19:00 AM
I know Olive :( - James :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/17/2014 10:36:00 AM
yes it is.. mr james,, :D one of my frustrations though..:D :P
Date: 7/30/2013 12:51:00 AM
A romantic brewin luv poem. Way to go pal, dis came out lovely!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/17/2014 10:35:00 AM
thanks much.. :) God bless you.. :D

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