Dr Hitendra Mehta Poet Sijo

Dance Is About Postures

three couples side by side gracefully moving in a dance 
are pairs true lovers or professional artists of group dance ?
dance is about postures, explores not reason for chemistry 

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By Hitendra Mehta
April 2011

HM in Members Contest - May I have this Sijo Dance by ^Rick Praise    
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Tahera Mannan June 1, 2011 at 10:03 PM Many warm congrats Hitendra for this win.

Jack Horne June 1, 2011 at 8:21 AM Many congrats, Hitendra : )

Carol Sunshine Brown June 1, 2011 at 6:37 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in ^Rick's Sijo contest Hitendra. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich May 31, 2011 at 7:36 PM Posture is really important on the show. So You Think You Can Dance. HAve you heard of that awesome reality show for dancers? And this poem is awesome too. Congratulations,Hitendra.

Dr.Ram Mehta May 31, 2011 at 6:43 PM Congratulations on the win the contest, Hitendra

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 31, 2011 at 5:53 PM congrats Hitendra on your HM in Rick's contest with this awesome write from the photo my friend.. enjoy a special honor with luv.. hope all is well with u and family... we are at beach...all week...

Carrie Richards May 31, 2011 at 4:46 PM Interesting and provocative questions posed!! Well done, Hitrendra!! Congratulations on your unique poem for Rick's contest!

Constance La France April 16, 2011 at 7:37 AM The pairs connect emotionally but are usually not lovers, enjoyed your poem, best of luck, and thanks for your comments on my poetry~~

Sara Kendrick April 16, 2011 at 4:14 AM Interesting direction to go with the picture..Good luck..Sara

Andrea Dietrich April 14, 2011 at 6:44 PM HI, Hitendra, thanks for your sweet comment to my poem and I enjoyed seeing this one today. Interesting how you saw them as three couples. But they very well could have been dancing as couples!

James Foulk April 14, 2011 at 10:31 AM a very creative Sijo, reading is a pleasure. thank you for your comment on Fort Sumter

Carolyn Devonshire April 14, 2011 at 9:27 AM Wow, you made quite a profound statement in your sijo, Hitendra. Be sure to call it a "sijo" instead of "I don't know." I think this is an excellent entry for Rick's contest and I hope to see your poem in the winners' circle. Love and blessings, Carolyn

Jack Horne April 14, 2011 at 6:55 AM Very interesting take on the picture, Hitendra