Dance Is About Postures

three couples side by side gracefully moving in a dance 
are pairs true lovers or professional artists of group dance ?
dance is about postures, explores not reason for chemistry 

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By Hitendra Mehta
April 2011

HM in Members Contest - May I have this Sijo Dance by ^Rick Praise    
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/1/2011 10:03:00 PM
Many warm congrats Hitendra for this win.
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Date: 6/1/2011 8:21:00 AM
Many congrats, Hitendra : )
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Date: 6/1/2011 6:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in ^Rick's Sijo contest Hitendra. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2011 7:36:00 PM
Posture is really important on the show. So You Think You Can Dance. HAve you heard of that awesome reality show for dancers? And this poem is awesome too. Congratulations,Hitendra.
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Date: 5/31/2011 6:43:00 PM
Congratulations on the win the contest, Hitendra
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Date: 5/31/2011 5:53:00 PM
congrats Hitendra on your HM in Rick's contest with this awesome write from the photo my friend.. enjoy a special honor with luv.. hope all is well with u and family... we are at beach...all week...
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Date: 5/31/2011 4:46:00 PM
Interesting and provocative questions posed!! Well done, Hitrendra!! Congratulations on your unique poem for Rick's contest!
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Date: 4/16/2011 7:37:00 AM
The pairs connect emotionally but are usually not lovers, enjoyed your poem, best of luck, and thanks for your comments on my poetry~~
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Date: 4/16/2011 4:14:00 AM
Interesting direction to go with the picture..Good luck..Sara
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Date: 4/14/2011 6:44:00 PM
HI, Hitendra, thanks for your sweet comment to my poem and I enjoyed seeing this one today. Interesting how you saw them as three couples. But they very well could have been dancing as couples!
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Date: 4/14/2011 10:31:00 AM
a very creative Sijo, reading is a pleasure. thank you for your comment on Fort Sumter
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Date: 4/14/2011 9:27:00 AM
Wow, you made quite a profound statement in your sijo, Hitendra. Be sure to call it a "sijo" instead of "I don't know." I think this is an excellent entry for Rick's contest and I hope to see your poem in the winners' circle. Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 4/14/2011 6:55:00 AM
Very interesting take on the picture, Hitendra
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