Dance Every Night

In a world where love is right
                 Hearts go dancing every night


The stars in a jealous heaven
                       shine green with envy
Your eyes outshine them
                               They see it when we
Dance every night, dance every night
                                     
Though in the sky, stars twinkle still
   They’ll never match the wondrous thrill
            of dancing every night 
              


The moon is intimidated 
                    Your glow out glows it 
It’s lost its luster
                                  Everyone knows it
You shine so bright, you shine so bright
                                  
And though the moon is still our friend
                 It has to hide when in the end
         we’re dancing every night
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Legros Kelley Avatar
September 16, 2022 at 1:13 PM
Oh goodness, so joyful! I use to dance and dance, I loved it so much! As I grow older and more stoic, as a grandma, I feel I need to behave myself, act my age and all that jazz....but you know what? Your poem makes me want to go into the back yard and dance beneath the stars, maybe Grammy can dance with the grandbabies beneath the moon and stars, maybe I'm not too old as long as I don't try to do disco, or, lol, ballet!! ;)
Gentile Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 5:13 AM
BJ, you are never too old! Your youthful spirit will see you through!! I bet you can still Disco with the best of them!! Thanks for your kind comments!!!
Sands Avatar
September 12, 2022 at 11:01 AM
This is fun Mike. I enjoyed this today :)
Gentile Avatar
September 13, 2022 at 5:05 AM
Thank you Heidi xxoo
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 3:30 PM
Hello Mike Gentile, You know reading this poem, i can vision couples dancing all night long. Happy weekend. xxxx-oooo.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 11, 2022 at 11:36 AM
Hello Mike , i hop you are having a lovely weekend. xxxoooo.
Gentile Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 4:39 PM
Thanks so much Darlene, Happy Weekend to you too xxoo
Mccann Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 2:12 PM
Such tender memories, Mike. Thank you for allowing me to recall them, too. Elizabeth
Gentile Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 4:38 PM
Thanks so much Elizabeth, so nice of you to say!!!
Pandit Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 4:32 AM
Enjoyed your poem, Mike. Lyrical, romantic!
Gentile Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 6:16 AM
Thanks so much Vijay!!
Kamoonpuri Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 4:01 AM
Wow fantastic imaginative poem when love's light seems to pale the starlight and moonlight. Kudos for this romantic dancing muse. <<<<<<<>>>>>>>^^^^^^^>>>>><<<<<<<< Plz read and comment my newest poem too.
Gentile Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 6:16 AM
Thanks so much, I will!!
Cunningham Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 3:55 AM
Brought back happy memories of my youth Mike, sadly now in the past. A feelgood poem. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
Gentile Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 6:16 AM
Thanks so much Tom!!
M  Avatar
September 9, 2022 at 9:02 PM
An absolutely beautiful poem Mike…I just love the first lines especially so sweet and romantic. Debx
Gentile Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 3:30 AM
Thanks so much Deb xxoo
Hankins Avatar
September 9, 2022 at 2:19 PM
Oh, wow, Mike. I love this. It brought back some wonderful memories of my disco days. Oh, how we danced! Believe it or not, disco is still very big down in Puerto Vallarta. So, when I go down there I thoroughly enjoy myself. Can't dance like that anymore, but I love watching (over a drink or two!)
Hankins Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 1:37 PM
Have you ever been to Mexico, Mike? I love Vallarta. I think you would, too. The next time I go down, I'll let you know when I'm down there. I'm thinking I'll go back in January probably if I don't make a trip to Vietnam to visit a nephew.
Gentile Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 3:32 AM
I need to visit Puerto Vallarta!! I never stopped loving Disco! Thanks Milt!! Happy Friday!!
Tor Avatar
September 9, 2022 at 1:36 PM
Mike really enjoyed reading this Moon reflection on that romantic dance... Wonderfully written by you my friend. Love your theme in this one Mike. Enjoy your weekend Mike...
Gentile Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 3:31 AM
Thank you Michael, a great weekend to you too !!
Logan Avatar
September 9, 2022 at 12:46 PM
I was putting your lyrics to music in my head and then started singing 'Dancing in the Moonlight.' (King Harvest) You can't dance and stay uptight. Loved it, Mike.
Gentile Avatar
September 10, 2022 at 3:30 AM
Thank you Jenna!! I love that song as well xxoo
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