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Dance Deity

Oh that I may hold her hands, dancing with my darling damsel, her sensual styles stunned me and swept my soul off this spirited stage, my mind is made up to mingle, so I'll move mildly my miss.

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Tahera Mannan

Date: 7/17/2013 10:47:00 PM

Many warm congrats for this win.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/17/2013 5:33:00 PM

Adeleke, Congrats with your awesome win... luv~ LINDA

Skat A

Date: 7/17/2013 4:35:00 PM

Congratulations with your dancing poem in Giorgio V's contest. have yourself a nice one ~ SKAT ~

Ingibo Benson

Date: 6/22/2011 8:47:00 PM

Very nice poem, Ade. The dance diety- reminds me of Agbor Dancer

Rick Parise

Date: 6/8/2011 9:30:00 PM

Congrats to you!!!!

Audrey Haick

Date: 6/3/2011 10:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your fine win in the contest, Adeleke! Hope all is well. Love, Annalise

Joseph Osita

Date: 6/2/2011 3:56:00 AM

Congrats on your big win,bro

Tahera Mannan

Date: 6/1/2011 10:02:00 PM

Many congrats Adeleke for this win with this lovely sijo.

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 6/1/2011 10:23:00 AM

Many congrats Adeleke on notching up big win in ^Rick's contest with this beautiful imagery. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Jack Horne

Date: 6/1/2011 8:20:00 AM

Many congrats, Adeleke: )

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/1/2011 6:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in ^Rick's Sijo contest Adeleke. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/31/2011 7:32:00 PM

VEry cute one, especially the first line! Congrats on your win, Adeleke.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/31/2011 6:41:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest, Adeleke

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/31/2011 4:43:00 PM

So I'll move mildly, my miss....:such polite phrase that is!! Love it!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/31/2011 4:06:00 PM

Congrats Adeleke on your HM in Rick's contest with this wonderful write from his photo my friend.. enjoy a special honor with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/5/2011 9:37:00 AM

Oh what a beautiful piece of poetry Adeleke my friend. I wish you the best in the contest and always. Love, Carol

Anthony Nutter

Date: 4/5/2011 7:21:00 AM

Enjoyed this lovely write this morning.

Tahera Mannan

Date: 4/5/2011 7:15:00 AM

Wow Adeleke such magic in these lines. Loved it.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/5/2011 6:55:00 AM

Flowing lines of poetry Adeleke to accompany the photo so grand.. good luck in the contest as your emotion exudes in your lines ..good luck my friend..luv..