Adeleke Adeite Poet Sijo

Dance Deity

Oh that I may hold her hands, dancing with my darling 
damsel,
her sensual styles stunned me and swept my soul off 
this spirited stage,
my mind is made up to mingle, so I'll move mildly my 
miss.

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Tahera Mannan July 17, 2013 at 10:47 PM Many warm congrats for this win.

Poet Destroyer A July 17, 2013 at 5:33 PM Adeleke, Congrats with your awesome win... luv~ LINDA

Skat A July 17, 2013 at 4:35 PM Congratulations with your dancing poem in Giorgio V's contest. have yourself a nice one ~ SKAT ~

Ingibo Benson June 22, 2011 at 8:47 PM Very nice poem, Ade. The dance diety- reminds me of Agbor Dancer

Audrey Haick June 3, 2011 at 10:25 AM Congratulations on your fine win in the contest, Adeleke! Hope all is well. Love, Annalise

Joseph Osita June 2, 2011 at 3:56 AM Congrats on your big win,bro

Tahera Mannan June 1, 2011 at 10:02 PM Many congrats Adeleke for this win with this lovely sijo.

Dr Hitendra Mehta June 1, 2011 at 10:23 AM Many congrats Adeleke on notching up big win in ^Rick's contest with this beautiful imagery. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Jack Horne June 1, 2011 at 8:20 AM Many congrats, Adeleke: )

Carol Sunshine Brown June 1, 2011 at 6:36 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in ^Rick's Sijo contest Adeleke. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich May 31, 2011 at 7:32 PM VEry cute one, especially the first line! Congrats on your win, Adeleke.

Dr.Ram Mehta May 31, 2011 at 6:41 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest, Adeleke

Carrie Richards May 31, 2011 at 4:43 PM So I'll move mildly, my miss....:such polite phrase that is!! Love it!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 31, 2011 at 4:06 PM Congrats Adeleke on your HM in Rick's contest with this wonderful write from his photo my friend.. enjoy a special honor with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown April 5, 2011 at 9:37 AM Oh what a beautiful piece of poetry Adeleke my friend. I wish you the best in the contest and always. Love, Carol

Anthony Nutter April 5, 2011 at 7:21 AM Enjoyed this lovely write this morning.

Tahera Mannan April 5, 2011 at 7:15 AM Wow Adeleke such magic in these lines. Loved it.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 5, 2011 at 6:55 AM Flowing lines of poetry Adeleke to accompany the photo so grand.. good luck in the contest as your emotion exudes in your lines ..good luck my friend..luv..