Dance Away

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Dance, Dance away No one looking at me Slowly dancing away Making a nuisance of myself I hope not No one coming to report me No, no I don't think So let's all dance and sing And play all day

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Silent One

Date: 10/27/2017 4:42:00 PM

This is lovely... You should go and introduce yourself in the latest blog by Becca Teagan. A chance to let people know about you.

Tahira Parveen
Date: 10/28/2017 10:32:00 AM

Thank you Silent One, will do :)

Vee Bdosa

Date: 1/23/2017 10:24:00 AM

Very simple and very good, 2 things that are difficult to maintain in poetry. But this is divine. But do you realize how difficult it is to get out on the dance floor for someone who has been raised and taught that dancing is taboo? It remains part of your life for all of your life.

Dm Babbit

Date: 12/11/2016 2:47:00 PM

I hope you always dance so free.

Tahira Parveen
Date: 12/14/2016 10:00:00 AM

Watching the grankid these days makes me laugh and join in, thanks for your lovely comment DM:)