Dance At the Fireplace

Leading you next to the fireplace..
Can I take your hand?
Leading you there somewhere
Won't you close your eyes awhile?
Don't get afraid or scared
I will do no pain or harm
Now, I will place both arms
Both arms to your narrow waist
Moving slightly one to the nape
Moving slowly one just lower
Won't you lean your head?
Lean to the hallow of my throat
As I will too
Butterflies will suddenly fly
sudden shivers will run down the spine
A song from the heart will be playing
My head I'll gently move
Searching soft cheeks to purr
Lingering my nose to fill
Smelling scents of you 
I'll land a kiss to your forehead 
And face to face, can I?
Closing my eyes beneath your gaze
One step at a time
Matching mine to yours
And yours to mine
our feet duet unto the floor
Owning this solitary moment
This solely moment for awhile

By: 
olive_eloi
7:41 pm
02/10/2014

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Fraser Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 1:09 PM
Dance at the fireplace, or a beach bonfire on the sands. If it happens to be with you, I'll feel a hundred grand. Dreamy romantic poetry Olive, James......
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 3:33 PM
:D! thanks.. :D
Koven Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 8:23 PM
Olive, Wonderful romantic poem. I enjoyed reading it as much as you enjoyed writing it. Allan
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
February 13, 2014 at 4:04 AM
hahaha.. thanks allan.. :) i really like it too.. . hahaha. I wish someday one will dance with me near a fireplace.. :) doesn't matter if he is my sister, dad or mother... or he my man :D God bless us all.. :)
Byte Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 4:30 PM
So beautiful as always and very romantic. I felt as if I was your dance partner as read your work. I would let you lead me to a fire place or anywhere and see those beautiful eyes and that wonderful glow as we would embrace into a slow dance
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
February 13, 2014 at 4:05 AM
hahahah.. thankks michael.. wahh.. I can not post in my blog.. :(
Goodson Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 2:33 PM
Take the ribbon from her hair -shake it loose and let it fall. George Jones knew a good line line in country music. I think perhaps you too have found that same romantic essence with your line, "Searching soft cheeks to purr." Love that! Nicely done~!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 3:02 PM
aha.. thank you for passing by and reading one of my compositions.. :D hahaha yes i like that line among the other lines.. :D and thanks for the correction.. :D purr.. GOD bless us.. :)
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