Dance

Do the electric slide Dare to boogie woogie Discover calypso Dazzle with jitter bug Dip to the beat and glide Delight to do the bump! Draw her close and tango --- 8/27/16

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Paul Callus

Date: 9/2/2016 2:44:00 PM

This is a lovely write, Joseph; it flows with beat and rhythm. I see you are quite up-to-date with different types of dances:) Congrats on your fine win. Regards // paul

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/1/2016 7:41:00 PM

Joseph, I like that you used each line to highlight a different dance. Congrats on your win! Blessings!

Joseph May
Date: 9/1/2016 8:56:00 PM

Thank you for my placement Kim...blessings

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/1/2016 4:42:00 AM

- Boogie woogie, Joseph ! - Congratulations on your placement in the contest, with this lovely write :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/1/2016 12:35:00 AM

I love this Joseph! You ended it with the most breathtaking of all dances the Tango...especially love the Argentine Tango! Congratulations! I am faving this little beauty! It is a top winner for me! 7 ; )

Viv Wigley

Date: 9/1/2016 12:34:00 AM

Well done, Joseph, on a fine bump 'n grind write. regards, Viv

Lu Loo

Date: 8/31/2016 8:01:00 PM

Joseph, congrats on your placement! :)-luloo

Laura Leiser

Date: 8/28/2016 4:26:00 PM

Love this one, Joseph :)