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Dance

Around the floor She flutters, Like a butterfly diving in the Blues on the sky. Her each and every step Has an intoxicating, Maddening power Which overwhelm All the spectators. A great dedication and much Determination on her Each foot step. She feeling the rhythm Like her heart beat. Each & every notes of The melody she clearly Painting by every foot-step. A dance so elegant, A dance so brilliant, A dance around the ballroom floor, So sweet, sensual and alive. A flawless flow with the melody With such a delightful grace. Every steps, each moves, A dance filled with love and passion.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/12/2012 8:12:00 AM
So lovely.. almost like Cindirella's ballroom.. beautiful! I replied to your questions re haiku in the reply area :)
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Chittaranjan Dey
Date: 4/12/2012 8:14:00 AM
Thank you dear poetess.
Date: 3/26/2012 9:54:00 PM
I really loved reading this one. AS Deb says below, EVOCATIVE!!! thanks for your comment. I was on a trip and was delighted to see it.
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Chittaranjan Dey
Date: 3/27/2012 8:03:00 AM
Thank you for your encouragement and I'm pleased that you have read this.
Date: 3/24/2012 7:38:00 AM
very evocative write! Nice to meet you new poet friend welcome Light & Love [If you need help or advise on anything feel free to soup mail me!]
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Chittaranjan Dey
Date: 3/24/2012 8:54:00 AM
Thank you dear poetess for your generous comment and support.
Date: 3/24/2012 7:18:00 AM
I too say "wonderful imagery." I have a granddaughter of 4 yrs old and she loves to dance. Her father took her to a school prom and I got to see her dance. She was having a wonderful time. Everyone was watching her- She was a SHOW! Thanks for the poem.
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Chittaranjan Dey
Date: 3/24/2012 8:53:00 AM
I'm grateful and deeply thanking your presence here.
Date: 3/24/2012 7:17:00 AM
A sweet and alive poem Dey..stunning xxx Hugs
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Chittaranjan Dey
Date: 3/24/2012 8:47:00 AM
Thank you for your sweet comment.

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