Dance

Hear the bass causing your feet to quake Letting it rise up, fills you to the brim Spinning, almost out of control but not quite - The beat becomes that of your heart Releasing you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Andresen Avatar
December 17, 2011 at 4:25 PM
Congratulations Dale,good!!!! OXOX Love Anne-Lise
Merryman Avatar
December 13, 2011 at 6:16 PM
Congrats on your HM, Dale. Kim
Neels Avatar
December 13, 2011 at 5:01 AM
I just love the way you describe the feeling of dancing Dale :) congratulations!!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 13, 2011 at 1:57 AM
Congratulations x
Dietrich Avatar
December 12, 2011 at 9:41 PM
What a great way to describe the feeling of dance, Dale. I like this! Congrats on the HM.
Williams Avatar
December 12, 2011 at 3:05 PM
Dale congrats on your win,..David
Brown Avatar
December 12, 2011 at 12:10 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Fours And Fives" contest Dale. Love, Carol
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