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For Joseph May's Pyramid Contest. 20/8/2026

Dance

DANCE
Graceful,
eloquence.

He held me so tight,
I was sure I would melt.
Instant passion as we danced.

"Movement and music become one."

dancepassionverse

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Andrea Dietrich

August 30, 2026 at 1:33 AM

Wonderful write. Big congrats

Speaks Volumes

August 30, 2026 at 3:42 PM

Thanks so much Andrea 🌹

Sara Kendrick

August 29, 2026 at 1:32 PM

Congratulations on your winning work in Joseph's contest. I was delighted to see your name there. Way to go. 👍⭐. Sara K.

Speaks Volumes

August 30, 2026 at 3:42 PM

Thanks so much Sara 🌹

Pascal Borg

August 29, 2026 at 12:15 PM

S V, congratulations on your 1st Prize win. I am so proud to share the podium with you.

Speaks Volumes

August 30, 2026 at 3:37 PM

Thanks so much Pascal

Joseph May

August 29, 2026 at 8:43 AM

Congrats on your win, Very nicely done

Speaks Volumes

August 30, 2026 at 3:37 PM

Thanks so much Joseph.

Paula Goldsmith

August 20, 2026 at 11:50 AM

Your "DANCE " is a lovely write with a pretty picture. Love Both... I enjoyed reading... "Good Luck" Have a lovely day writing away............

Speaks Volumes

August 25, 2026 at 11:10 PM

Paula your comments always bring such a smile. I hope one day you will know how much you and your praise are appreciated.

Alison A Smith nee Howarth

August 19, 2026 at 10:34 PM

What a magical pyramid. Well done.

Speaks Volumes

August 19, 2026 at 11:09 PM

Oh sweet Alison, how delightful it is, to have your ever encouraging comments adorn my humble poems. I cant imagine how to thank you enough.

Dance

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