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Dance

the music plays a slow, haunting number you hold me tight and we dance barely moving feeling the notes feeling the lyrics feeling the moment caught in time before the song changes and someone cuts in never finishing the dance we started

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/30/2009 12:45:00 PM
Sounds disappointing. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/30/2009 10:56:00 AM
It's my party, and I'll cry if I want to, you would cry too, if it happen to you. Your poem made me think of that song. Just reminiscing, forgive me!Lol! Sincerely Moses
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