Tidy Desk Poet Rhyme

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Dance

                                   Pulsating rhythm
                               Fiery beating of drums
                              Repetitive enchantment
                                a seducing deep aum 

                                 An ancient language 
                               for those who can hear  
                                disestablishing illusion
                                    relinquishing fear

                                Perception transmutes
                                    in timeless trance
                              each soul now-imprisoned
                            within the freedom of dance

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Unseeking Seeker September 19, 2021 at 2:59 AM The omnipresent reverberation, Ohm! Beautiful poem Tidy Desk September 19, 2021 at 3:51 AM Thank you very much for the read and comment, Unseeking seeker, have a great day.

David Smith August 31, 2021 at 3:50 AM Dance , the ultimate and oldest form of self expression. Great tribute/reminder. Every now and then I manage to dance a problem away. the music/beat imprinted on my mind even when not physically present. Our grandson has danced through his first 2 and a half years, all the signs are he might not grow out of it. Thanks for this one David in NZ Tidy Desk September 9, 2021 at 12:24 PM You are welcome David, thank you very much for your wonderful comment.

Darlene De Beaulieu April 16, 2021 at 4:06 PM Hello Carl Bellerose, as i read this poem, i can focus on the dancers. Enjoy your evening my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu July 30, 2021 at 5:07 PM Welcome to Poetry Soup. enjoy your evening my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu April 17, 2021 at 5:31 AM Hello Carl, good morning. Enjoy your day my friend. Tidy Desk April 17, 2021 at 1:17 AM Thank you so much for the read, Darlene, wishing you a wonderful evening.

Mystic Rose Rose April 13, 2021 at 3:45 PM You describe the moment so well, I was lost in the ethereal feel of it all. Thank you for sharing, :) Tidy Desk April 13, 2021 at 11:45 PM Thank you very much for the read Mystic Rose, and your wonderful comment, happy dancing.

Kim Merryman April 10, 2021 at 7:08 AM I like this, Carl! It has a smooth rhythm and great rhyme. Blessings, Kim M Tidy Desk April 10, 2021 at 7:15 AM Thank you very much, Kim, your comment has made my day, greatly appreciated, have a wonderful evening.