Dan

Dan was a mountaineer Daring and cavalier He climbed great heights Never took fright And hasn't been seen for years

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/26/2020 7:09:00 AM

I picture him as being a Gaston-like character (beauty and the beast). Great, Shirley! I am not sure if I’ve commented on your poetry before but I was intrigued by Jenish Somadas first place tribute to you!

Shirley Hawkins
Date: 1/27/2020 12:01:00 AM

I think Dan is still floating around somewhere! Thank you for all your comments. I can't put into words how honoured I feel to be given such an undeserving tribute by Jenish who has encouraged me to continue writing and also makes me laugh. A true Gentleman