Damsel In Distress

What is the world,
But an oyster to you?
What are other people,
If not aids to help you

What purpose do you serve?
What do you know how to do?
Nothing. Nothing at all
But sit, waiting for someone to save you.

You poor damsel
Always in distress
I wish I could respect you
But you're just too helpless

Other people use their legs,
Their feet, and their brain
You know one day,
You should do the same

But you would rather be a burden
It really is a shame
I think you like to struggle
You want life to be a pain

You poor damsel
Always in distress
I wish I could respect you
But you're just too helpless

Things could be better
If you would at least try
But that means you actually have to do something,
You prefer to just cry

Cry and complain
Complain, moan and sigh
"World look at me, please!
Or else I'll die"

You poor damsel
Always in distress
I wish I could respect you
But you're just too helpless

One day I pray you learn
To do things by yourself
Instead of choosing not to move
Without the assistance of someone else

One day no one will be there
To hear you when you call
And the world won't stop
To brace your fake fall

You poor damsel
Always in distress
I wish I could respect you
But you're just too helpless
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Bloom Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 12:22 PM
Hi! Loved this poem. Your rhyming and flow pair perfectly together. Can't wait for your next one! :) - A.B.
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April 19, 2016 at 11:32 PM
Ashley Chanel, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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April 19, 2016 at 6:50 AM
Ashley, Nice first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs
Chanel Avatar
April 19, 2016 at 11:31 AM
Thank you, Manmath!
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April 18, 2016 at 8:09 PM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Ashly. :)
Chanel Avatar
April 19, 2016 at 11:30 AM
Thank you!!
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April 18, 2016 at 6:52 PM
Ashley,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Chanel Avatar
April 19, 2016 at 11:30 AM
Thank you, Linda!
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