Damsel Causing Distress

DAMSEL CAUSING DISTRESS


The knight errant sent for me, but I’ve gone missing
For three days now, while he’s composed a ditty:
In the tide of feminism I still haven’t given up kissing
Being what is termed fatalistically pretty - 

But I can be the ‘no’ that makes for nice
When his flame burns under his boiler suit,
Then I’m decently torpid like a fish on ice
Where the guts need to go when the runts root - 

A pillowing breast, my nightcap a soliloquy
To hell with his billowing sails and pregnant ships
Let him go, this guy who’s got everything but me
With his big thighs, big legs, big hips - 

All the things we women should shun
Save satin, silk,  squirm,  sperm,  and …sun.

(c) Rosemarie Rowley
From IN MEMORY OF HER (2008)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/27/2014 4:42:00 AM
Woah sensational! Notty creative ahem lol he he he. Some lines like for a femme fatale eh. Awesome rhyme here too. Is the poem personal? Do pls review my latest poem too.
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Rosemarie Rowley
Date: 12/27/2014 6:02:00 AM
There will always be femme fatales and errant knights! Thanks for the comment. I use different persona when writing so they are not about me usually.
Date: 8/31/2014 10:18:00 PM
Nice piece Rosemary. Superlative and enjoyed... Verlena
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Date: 7/29/2014 7:46:00 AM
This is an absolute masterpiece. Its so powerful but soft. I love it so much. Thanks for the brilliant share.
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Date: 7/14/2014 10:52:00 AM
Rosemarie Rowley, the story of my life. To shun away sounds good. Well done...SKAT
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Rosemarie Rowley
Date: 7/14/2014 11:14:00 AM
Thanks, Skat. Not all who write pretty ditties are fine gentlemen. But we can't give men up, for the sake of the few decent honourable ones.
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