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Damp Day

grey clouds like shrouds hover cover wind speed like steed fright'ning lightning thunder sunder cryin' welkin raindrops fat plops muddles puddles pit pat rhythm that awakes damp shakes earth drenched thirst quenched God's free AC

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Date: 10/17/2023 8:37:00 PM
What a clever poem. I really 'see' each sentence as I read. Eric Carle, a famous children's author wrote a book titled, Clouds. The cover is a clown walking made out of clouds. Your poem would make a nice children's lesson. Kids could close their eyes and listen to you poem, then draw pictures of the sentences they remember, sharing them w/ the class afterwards. Can you tell I enjoyed this poem? :)
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Date: 9/4/2023 3:28:00 PM
great string of footles Jo:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/4/2023 2:36:00 PM
Great job with these. For Brian? I can't think what to give him any more except for footles.
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/4/2023 3:28:00 PM
I submitted footles - BIG n/a lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/4/2023 2:38:00 AM
- Great done, Jo :) - (I find footle difficult) - hugs
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