Damp Day


grey clouds
like shrouds

hover
cover

wind speed
like steed

fright'ning
lightning

thunder
sunder

cryin'
welkin

raindrops
fat plops

muddles
puddles

pit pat
rhythm that

awakes
damp shakes

earth drenched
thirst quenched

God's free
AC

rainweatherfootle

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Marikate Kingston

October 17, 2023 at 8:37 PM

What a clever poem. I really 'see' each sentence as I read. Eric Carle, a famous children's author wrote a book titled, Clouds. The cover is a clown walking made out of clouds. Your poem would make a nice children's lesson. Kids could close their eyes and listen to you poem, then draw pictures of the sentences they remember, sharing them w/ the class afterwards. Can you tell I enjoyed this poem? :)