Damn the Rain

floodwaters pour out my ears
like some Black Plague fountain
with spitting angels
life can be hard to look at
images spilling into boots
filling with blood and ignorance
everyone a con artist of some sort
on the inside if not the outside
can't be avoided even for saints
maybe worse for them
with their eyelids ripped off
to a ghastly panoply of suffering
that meditation can't touch
that subjective blinding can't anesthetize
we somehow feel guilt for it all
instead of hunting down the guilty
and driving a hand hewn stake
hard into their 3rd eye
we'd rather shrug and justify
duck down a hooker's alley
bake a cake pet a doggy
watch paint dry mop the floor
than roll the dice and
learn to swim in it
like black swans

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 8/7/2019 11:29:00 AM
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Date: 6/24/2019 1:41:00 PM
Hello Walter Alter, Walter rain is good for the earth. It is liquid sunshine for the earth and plants and farmer's field. The ducks like it. Also when it is drizzling it is good for our skins. it washes our glasses. Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/27/2019 12:42:00 PM
Hello Walter Alter,okay now I get it. Thanks for telling me. Have a nice day my friend.
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Walter Alter
Date: 6/25/2019 10:15:00 PM
Yah, sure, but I was referencing a metaphorical rain like the one in the Bob Dylan song.
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