Dammit

“DAMMIT!” as basements flooded they gazed upon the structure damning the beavers John G. Lawless 4/10/2015

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2015 6:29:00 PM

haha, Did you make this up? If not, I guess it was not that funny!!

John Lawless
Date: 4/14/2015 6:51:00 PM

Yes Andrea, this is the result of a troubled mind seeking fodder for a senryu. Thanks for stopping by.

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 4/10/2015 7:18:00 PM

Oh I do hope this is not a true story. Very good write, and I love the quirkiness of the punny title. ~Jan

John Lawless
Date: 4/10/2015 7:41:00 PM

Not yet, but I saw the cutting of a beaver and the initial twig mound along the river near a very exclusive stretch of homes. Thanks for stopping by to comment

Tammy Reams

Date: 4/10/2015 6:58:00 PM

Great Senryu John! Good luck in the contest.

John Lawless
Date: 4/10/2015 7:39:00 PM

thanks Tammy