Dammit

“DAMMIT!”


as basements flooded
they gazed upon the structure
damning the beavers



John G. Lawless
4/10/2015

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Andrea Dietrich

April 14, 2015 at 6:29 PM

haha, Did you make this up? If not, I guess it was not that funny!!

John Lawless

April 14, 2015 at 6:51 PM

Yes Andrea, this is the result of a troubled mind seeking fodder for a senryu. Thanks for stopping by.

Jaycee Cervenka

April 10, 2015 at 7:18 PM

Oh I do hope this is not a true story. Very good write, and I love the quirkiness of the punny title. ~Jan

John Lawless

April 10, 2015 at 7:41 PM

Not yet, but I saw the cutting of a beaver and the initial twig mound along the river near a very exclusive stretch of homes. Thanks for stopping by to comment