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Dame

Can only smoke remain Visible to thee, I arraign Distance carved out gashes Proximity charred me to ashes Left me to burn, never felt flame One glare of the radiant dame Burn out one's own nest, is absurd blazed my heart, that sunbird.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/27/2014 6:24:00 PM
intense and beautifully penned:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/27/2014 12:45:00 AM
MALIK, Congratulations!!! Thank you for supporting my contest. Sorry, it took this long to post the winning poems. Stop by my latest blog "A Woman's Gift" if you'd like. Enjoy life and the Holidays. :) Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 9/29/2014 1:42:00 PM
Short but full of intensity. I like the way you write ^^
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Date: 9/26/2014 5:00:00 AM
A wonderful piece to start my afternoon! Congrats for having your work featured in PS homepage! :-)
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Malik Yaseen
Date: 9/26/2014 5:24:00 AM
Thanks Teddy for your visit and kind remarks..
Date: 9/8/2014 4:29:00 PM
Your thoughts and contemplations are original and beautiful... I really enjoyed reading this small verse, so full of meaning. Those last two lines...the entirety of this poem really...just flow so nicely... Keep up the amazing work. Always, Laura
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Malik Yaseen
Date: 9/9/2014 1:34:00 AM
Thanks a lot Laura, for appreciating my work.It boosts the morale. Hope to see you always nearby here. Stay blessed.. Malik
Date: 9/5/2014 7:22:00 AM
Intriguing write..:)I like your first four lines you pictured one melancholic scene then followed with a tragic scene somehow... WARM WELCOME to poetrysoup...:)!
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Malik Yaseen
Date: 9/6/2014 5:31:00 AM
Thanks a lot Olive:) for your appreciation, it will help a lot indeed. thanks for welcoming me, i hope to get inputs in future also from a viewer like you. Stay blessed Olive.
Date: 9/4/2014 10:57:00 PM
Thanks Dear Anne for your warm and appreciating words.
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Date: 9/4/2014 7:54:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Malik - I choose your first great written poem- You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Malik Yaseen
Date: 9/4/2014 10:53:00 PM
Thanks a lot dear Anne, your warm and appreciating words are highly influential. stay blessed
Date: 9/3/2014 11:19:00 PM
Thanks Pandita and Poet Destroyer A for your nice reflections.
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Date: 9/3/2014 8:17:00 PM
Hi Malik, what an excellent write this is! A warm welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Pandita
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Malik Yaseen
Date: 9/3/2014 11:18:00 PM
Thanks Dear Pandita Sa nchez
Date: 9/3/2014 10:37:00 AM
Malik, this is wonderful and romantic, in a passionate way, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/3/2014 5:52:00 AM
Blazed in the last line. typing error
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