Damaris Njeri Macharia

Dancing was not enough
And singing was a hard 
thing for me
Many smiles around but 
hers was amazing
Arising sun her face was 
that day
Resting i did not feel like
In thoughts is all i needed 
to be 
Sectretly drawn by fantasy

Never thought i would 
admire
Jewerelly but i was wrong
Everyday i stare at her 
rings
Rings that make her a 
queen 
In a palace of sweetlove

Many advice me to leave 
her
And consider them the 
best opttion
Confessing their love for 
me and daily
Hugging with a lot of 
happiness
And kissing to show their 
love
Reducing my thirst for 
true love
In a cage they have kept 
me
Away from my queen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 2/21/2014 5:01:00 AM
Great write and congrats on the fine win, samuel
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Date: 2/20/2014 12:09:00 AM
Samuel, CONGRATULATIONS, I had fun reading this... I posted a few fun pictures, on my latest blog, http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=20799&PoetID=17922 Enjoy and stop by if you like. Love ~SKAT~
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Samuel Wainaina
Date: 2/20/2014 5:24:00 AM
Thank you... What word would i use to describe you...???
Date: 2/7/2014 9:33:00 AM
Nice try, I agree with Akash
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Date: 2/7/2014 6:14:00 AM
"Many smiles around but hers was amazing" ......amazing line for everyone who falls in love ....... lovely poem Samuel...
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Date: 2/5/2014 6:50:00 PM
Nooooo! You have to be with the girl you love. I would like to see follow-up poems in which you successfully woo her and write endless poems dedicated to your love. Or you could get your heart broken, I suppose... but that usually results in good poetry too. :)
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Samuel Wainaina
Date: 2/6/2014 1:02:00 AM
Thanks for that.. True love is hard to get and when got should be handled with much care....
Date: 1/26/2014 10:52:00 PM
Hi, Samuel, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Samuel Wainaina
Date: 2/6/2014 1:05:00 AM
Hello....sorry for the delay but am fine. I am young and love playing with words especially 'love words'. I like it when i write what i feel in my heart. Just hope to deliver more exiting poems in future.
Date: 1/26/2014 11:32:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Samuel - I choose your first sweet written poem - hope you will write many more in the future :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Samuel Wainaina
Date: 1/26/2014 2:08:00 PM
Thank you... I am more than greatful to be associated with you people. Hope ill enjoy being walking with you
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