Damages

Face to face
Mirrors cracking between the irony 
As the glasses fall
And my breath is lost
My eyes turn red 
And my feet 
can not seem to find the ground 
My hands fighting to hold on
My body has given up
But my soul remains intact 
I just don't know about yours.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Nkosi Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 12:43 PM
Very good, i just like the last last line 'I just don't know about yours'
Ghobede Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 2:09 PM
The question marks were supposed to be a smiley face sorry
Ghobede Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 2:07 PM
Thankyou so much treasure??
Gupta Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 7:54 AM
Fulfilling metaphors ... Very nice write ...
Ghobede Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 2:10 PM
Thank you for your comments in my poetry...much appreciated
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