Dalliance With the Winter Birch

Dalliance With The Winter Birch

Crystal glances at the brilliant blue 
Marching up there with blinding sun soaked sky
Clouds stream by 
They come apart in seams of wonder  
As the day begins to shine
Work waits there on the farm
A dalliance with winter wind and trees begin
White limbs swing limp, spring back again on birches
Firm roots, frozen earth, hold the hard wood down
I climb the highest branches there  
At 8:00 am farm chores start once again
They can wait for just a while longer
While all of nature sinks into the skin
As I figure out how to return
Somehow I got lost above the trees
Tangled in the maze of branches
Caught, never found, while climbing birches 
Never quite figured out
Which way was up or down

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/10/2014 6:38:00 PM
great imagery. I like the lines about the clouds and dissipating seams. being raised somewhat a farm boy myself, I could relate. (only my memory lane consists of oak trees. )
Login to Reply
Schumacker Avatar
Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/10/2014 7:21:00 PM
Hi Michael, Thank you so much. In reality, I grew up with oak trees in my youth and climbed many giant oaks over the years. Have a great day. Earl
Schumacker Avatar
Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/10/2014 7:14:00 PM
Hi Michael, Glad you liked it. My first consideration in all my works is to entertain the reader and offer something new and unusual. Thanks for commenting. Have a great day. Earl
Date: 11/6/2014 8:21:00 AM
absolutely fabulous imagery Earl:-) Hugs Jan x
Login to Reply
Allison Avatar
Jan Allison
Date: 11/6/2014 9:13:00 AM
I remember silver birch trees in a neighbours garden when i was growing up - this poem brought back lovely memories - in fact I met up with him when I was in Malta last week! hugs Jan xx
Schumacker Avatar
Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/6/2014 8:57:00 AM
Good morning Jan, Thank you for finding merit in this one. It took me several rewrites and restructuring to get it right and who doesn't like birch trees? Thanks again. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Take care. Earl
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad