Evelyn Judy Buehler Poet Rhyme

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Daisy Mae

Daisy Mae is walking by the scented jade meadow,
of warm butterscotch days and mulberry sundown,
And in the green trees, lingers a murder of crows,
Lying in wait for raven night, when luster abounds!

Vast skies are teal, and a whisper's on the breeze.
She is lost in the moment, as the sunshine pours,
And scarlet and purple birds sing in different keys,
As meadow and moor, thrum in vibrant discourse.

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Kim Rodrigues August 5, 2022 at 7:08 AM There’s almost a frightful pause in the center as a “murder of crows” lies in wait, yet Daisy Mae, surely a child, is unaware of dangers only taking in the sounds, colors, and life about her. Oh my goodness, this is a fave. I was certainly drawn to the title and then read this opulent poem, my friend! Evelyn Judy Buehler August 5, 2022 at 11:15 AM Thank you very much for the honor of your comments and your fave. They add a bright spot to my day. :)

Gershon Wolf August 4, 2022 at 6:47 PM Whoa! You have introduced me to a 'murder of crows.' Actually thought it was some kind of Freudian Slip before I looked it up. Thanks, Evelyn! ~ Undereducated Evelyn Judy Buehler August 4, 2022 at 9:45 PM You're very welcome! I was only recently introduced to the term myself, which comes from old folk tales and superstitions. ~ Newly Educated :D

Suzanne Delaney August 4, 2022 at 5:14 AM Evelyn: Such a pretty world painted with pretty words. Loved it, Best, SuZ Evelyn Judy Buehler August 4, 2022 at 12:32 PM Thank you so much, SuZ. :)

Victor Buhagiar August 4, 2022 at 1:30 AM Great poetry. You're one of the best here. Evelyn Judy Buehler August 4, 2022 at 12:31 PM I could say the same of you. You have my heartfelt thanks. :)

Harry Horsman August 3, 2022 at 7:51 PM This is amazing, Evelyn, truly poetic. Evelyn Judy Buehler August 3, 2022 at 8:24 PM You have my deepest thanks, Harry.