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Daisy Field

A cruel world that I have been brought into One full of prejudices and judgmental stares Of prying eyes that wait in the dark for you to slip up And you feel as though stuck in an infinite chasm Of your failures and mistakes Never able to forget your faults and your insecurities But somewhere in the far corners of this world In the hidden places and holds just out of reach A helpful spirit reaches out a hand to pull you up To help heal your wounds and erase your sorrows They take you to a special place A place not unlike any you've ever been before One of hope and love and acceptance One that welcomes you wholly for who you are They take you to a field of daisies I've been taken to that field of daisies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/13/2014 12:32:00 PM
Much inspiration when finding that special place. Emily, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/12/2014 7:47:00 PM
Hi Emily, well expressed.... , I like your first poetic piece on the site , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/12/2014 7:07:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Emily- I choose your first lovely poem and hope you will write many more in the future - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/12/2014 7:03:00 PM
Welcome. if this poem is anything to go by. your excellent, You express yourself so well.Well done. best wishes. Pete..
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Date: 1/12/2014 6:41:00 PM
Emily, that is a "gem". At first glance, dark and then sparkling with hope and optimism. You took me on a journey from a cave to a sunny meadow. Very moving. Congratulations on your first poem! Take care & write more! Cynthia
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