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Daisy Darkness

midnight was glowing
in recall of antique gold
huge yellow daisy

pleasures we once knew
when dusk daisy glowed redly
twirl memory lane

golden onyx dark
shrouding melancholy moon
awakens rapture

Copyright © Evelyn Judy Buehler | Year Posted 2024

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Tom Woody Date: 6/9/2024 4:35:00 PM You're even a maestro at haiku. Love the color mixes Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 6/9/2024 5:09:00 PM Thank you for your gracious, gratifying remarks, Tom. Happy Sunday! :)

Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/9/2024 5:14:00 AM Such wonderful lines: midnight was glowing in recall of antique gold - pierces the darkness, magical! Hugs ~ Kim Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 6/9/2024 4:54:00 PM Thank you for sharing your pleasure in this poem with me. Your gracious compliments bring smiles. :)

Silent One Date: 6/7/2024 1:26:00 PM Awesome haiku... great selection of words.. Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 6/7/2024 10:42:00 PM Many thanks, my friend. :)

Karen Jones Date: 6/7/2024 5:24:00 AM This is lovely. My favorite lines are “when dusk daisy glowed redly…twirl memory lane” Thanks for sharing Evelyn! Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 6/7/2024 10:42:00 PM Thank you very much, Karen. Your gracious words bring pure delight.

Sotto Poet Date: 6/6/2024 12:18:00 PM Evelyn, your poem is notable for its stark juxtapositions. I was really fascinated by the illustration of the melancholic moon. Deep and meaningful poem. Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 6/6/2024 10:42:00 PM I extend my heartfelt thanks for the great pleasure of your comment. Have a wonderful weekend. :)

Paula Goldsmith Date: 6/6/2024 9:23:00 AM I enjoyed reading your lovely Haiku writes for your pretty Daisy flower. Pretty flower picture. A wonderful ending... Have a blessed day writing away........................... Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 6/6/2024 10:33:00 PM Thank you for your lovely comments. It's such a pleasure to read them. Have a wonderful weekend. :)

Hilda Greenhough Date: 6/6/2024 7:35:00 AM Your poem has great contrasting impact. I was fascinated with the picture of the melancholy moon. Memorable haiku. Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 6/6/2024 10:30:00 PM I'm touched that you were fascinated. Thank you for your kind words. :)

Victor Buhagiar Date: 6/6/2024 3:39:00 AM Your gift of hues from flowers will always be pleasing. Login to Reply Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 6/6/2024 10:26:00 PM Nice to know, Victor. Thank you very much. ;)