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midnight was glowing in recall of antique gold huge yellow daisy pleasures we once knew when dusk daisy glowed redly twirl memory lane golden onyx dark shrouding melancholy moon awakens rapture

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Date: 6/9/2024 4:35:00 PM
You're even a maestro at haiku. Love the color mixes
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/9/2024 5:09:00 PM
Thank you for your gracious, gratifying remarks, Tom. Happy Sunday! :)
Date: 6/9/2024 5:14:00 AM
Such wonderful lines: midnight was glowing in recall of antique gold - pierces the darkness, magical! Hugs ~ Kim
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/9/2024 4:54:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your pleasure in this poem with me. Your gracious compliments bring smiles. :)
Date: 6/7/2024 1:26:00 PM
Awesome haiku... great selection of words..
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/7/2024 10:42:00 PM
Many thanks, my friend. :)
Date: 6/7/2024 5:24:00 AM
This is lovely. My favorite lines are “when dusk daisy glowed redly…twirl memory lane” Thanks for sharing Evelyn!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/7/2024 10:42:00 PM
Thank you very much, Karen. Your gracious words bring pure delight.
Date: 6/6/2024 12:18:00 PM
Evelyn, your poem is notable for its stark juxtapositions. I was really fascinated by the illustration of the melancholic moon. Deep and meaningful poem.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/6/2024 10:42:00 PM
I extend my heartfelt thanks for the great pleasure of your comment. Have a wonderful weekend. :)
Date: 6/6/2024 9:23:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely Haiku writes for your pretty Daisy flower. Pretty flower picture. A wonderful ending... Have a blessed day writing away...........................
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/6/2024 10:33:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely comments. It's such a pleasure to read them. Have a wonderful weekend. :)
Date: 6/6/2024 7:35:00 AM
Your poem has great contrasting impact. I was fascinated with the picture of the melancholy moon. Memorable haiku.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/6/2024 10:30:00 PM
I'm touched that you were fascinated. Thank you for your kind words. :)
Date: 6/6/2024 3:39:00 AM
Your gift of hues from flowers will always be pleasing.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/6/2024 10:26:00 PM
Nice to know, Victor. Thank you very much. ;)

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