Evelyn Judy Buehler Poet Haiku

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Daisy Darkness

midnight was glowing
in recall of antique gold
huge yellow daisy

pleasures we once knew
when dusk daisy glowed redly
twirl memory lane

golden onyx dark
shrouding melancholy moon
awakens rapture

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Kim Rodrigues June 9, 2024 at 5:14 AM Such wonderful lines: midnight was glowing in recall of antique gold - pierces the darkness, magical! Hugs ~ Kim Evelyn Judy Buehler June 9, 2024 at 4:54 PM Thank you for sharing your pleasure in this poem with me. Your gracious compliments bring smiles. :)

Silent One June 7, 2024 at 1:26 PM Awesome haiku... great selection of words.. Evelyn Judy Buehler June 7, 2024 at 10:42 PM Many thanks, my friend. :)

Karen Jones June 7, 2024 at 5:24 AM This is lovely. My favorite lines are “when dusk daisy glowed redly…twirl memory lane” Thanks for sharing Evelyn! Evelyn Judy Buehler June 7, 2024 at 10:42 PM Thank you very much, Karen. Your gracious words bring pure delight.

Sotto Poet June 6, 2024 at 12:18 PM Evelyn, your poem is notable for its stark juxtapositions. I was really fascinated by the illustration of the melancholic moon. Deep and meaningful poem. Evelyn Judy Buehler June 6, 2024 at 10:42 PM I extend my heartfelt thanks for the great pleasure of your comment. Have a wonderful weekend. :)

Paula Goldsmith June 6, 2024 at 9:23 AM I enjoyed reading your lovely Haiku writes for your pretty Daisy flower. Pretty flower picture. A wonderful ending... Have a blessed day writing away........................... Evelyn Judy Buehler June 6, 2024 at 10:33 PM Thank you for your lovely comments. It's such a pleasure to read them. Have a wonderful weekend. :)

Hilda Greenhough June 6, 2024 at 7:35 AM Your poem has great contrasting impact. I was fascinated with the picture of the melancholy moon. Memorable haiku. Evelyn Judy Buehler June 6, 2024 at 10:30 PM I'm touched that you were fascinated. Thank you for your kind words. :)

Victor Buhagiar June 6, 2024 at 3:39 AM Your gift of hues from flowers will always be pleasing. Evelyn Judy Buehler June 6, 2024 at 10:26 PM Nice to know, Victor. Thank you very much. ;)