Daisy

Rapturous petals always reflect the immortal,fiery light. The impregnable,potent snowstorm abides in the passing rainbow. The symphonic melody of the past blooms like a delightful creek. Every step in this tough, rocky road is watered by agonizing tears. It enfolds the undying, unrelenting sun. Its solace is a sublime, wandering grace of the dark rill. Unraveling the tapestry of zeal is released an unwavering truth crossing the labyrinthine heart. The light of diamond transcends unswerving,towering cliffs. Our beloved ,enduring daisy,even the wise star bows to your innocence,grace and beauty.
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Ashley Avatar
April 30, 2024 at 10:57 AM
Dear Mulu, I was captivated by the rich, thought-provoking beauty of your imagery. Such a splendid poetic piece and the last five lines a grand finale compelling me to linger over your amazing verse. Congratulations for your win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Magdalinos Avatar
May 1, 2024 at 1:09 AM
Hello Susan.Thank you for your kind words. Congratulations on your first place in Brain's contest. Kindest regards ,Mulu.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 2, 2024 at 11:48 AM
Hello Mulu, the daisy is a beautiful flower. It makes a bouquet of other flowers brighter. I like all daisies . A beautiful poem. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 2, 2024 at 3:29 PM
Enjoy your evening Mulu. Darlene/
Magdalinos Avatar
April 2, 2024 at 2:19 PM
Hello Darlene,thank you.Have a blessed afternoon.
Kendrick Avatar
April 2, 2024 at 3:08 AM
I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for sharing. Petals of daisy so delicate and white unless they are Gerber daisies then they can be different colors, but those white petals remind me of a wedding or springtime romance. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara K
Magdalinos Avatar
April 2, 2024 at 9:12 AM
Thank you,Sara.Have a blessed day.
Dietrich Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 8:20 PM
Wow. This is fantastic. Pretty imagery and great punctuation. I really love how you did the ending.
Magdalinos Avatar
March 25, 2024 at 7:48 PM
Dear Andrea,thank you. Andrea Blessing.
Buehler Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 12:07 AM
The delicate beauty of the timeless daisy is elegantly recreated in these lovely lines, Mulu. Thank you for sharing. :)
Magdalinos Avatar
March 25, 2024 at 7:50 PM
Dear Evelyn ,thank you,Evelyn Blessing.
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