Daisies

Vibrant white daisies bloom, They dance in green meadows, Sunlit petals gently sway, Catching hints of spring fragrances, Nature's smile across the sky.

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Zyrool Gifford

Date: 5/28/2024 12:22:00 PM

Simply beautiful, Don. The blooms of Spring are stunning. Have a lovely day.

Don Iannone
Date: 5/28/2024 2:47:00 PM

Zyrool, thank you so much. Nature is an amazing time of the year. Daisies, so simple, so beautiful,

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/28/2024 9:06:00 AM

Hey Don, Your poem is like a breath of fresh air! The imagery of white daisies dancing in green meadows is so vivid and evocative. You've captured the essence of springtime beautifully, with all its colors, scents, and the joy of nature's renewal. It's like taking a stroll through a sunny field with each line. Keep spreading those positive vibes through your poetry! - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Don Iannone
Date: 5/28/2024 2:46:00 PM

Daniel, thank you I most appreciate your kind words. And thank you for reading the poem. Best wishes, Don.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 5/28/2024 3:45:00 AM

A lovely poem about daisies, it reads top to bottom and bottom to top, which is something I really like… Beryl

Don Iannone
Date: 5/28/2024 2:46:00 PM

What a beautiful thing to say! Thank you so much, Beryl.