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Daily Strife

Within our personal trials we LET
Darkness reside for we are NOT
Perfect by no means in  YOUR
Sight but we will open our HEART
To overcome our burden and BE
Lifted up and no longer TROUBLED


John 14:1

A try at HG and Dane Ann's new form of poetry.

inspirationali do not know?

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Andrea Dietrich

August 3, 2011 at 1:22 AM

I remember when they introduced this form, Phyllis. You did really well with it here.

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 16, 2010 at 5:59 AM

I hope you are having a wonderful day Phyllis. To me it is always a pleasure to read your poetry. Today I want to thank you for commenting on my poetry. I truly appreciate you taking the time to comment. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

John Loving Iii

April 22, 2010 at 3:17 PM

PERFECT!!! great end line! and it's biblical. has to go to my favs. JOHN HENRY LOVING III

Simone Segal

March 28, 2010 at 9:29 AM

Another woderful write, love Simone

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

February 19, 2010 at 4:47 PM

Dear PhyllisCongratulations This is a Masterfully Done "End Line Word" POEM I do hope YOU have entered it in Dane Ann's Contest THANK-YOU for Your Support in DANE and My new Form of POETRY If this is only a "try" in this form I can't wait for YOUR "End Line Word" POEM once YOU feel confident I await YOUR next POEM in this Form Superb Write You have captured the Concept of this Form Encore My Dear LOVE YOU ALWAYS YOUR Liege...HG

Carolyn Devonshire

February 17, 2010 at 5:08 PM

Awesome end-line poem, Phyllis. A very good message; none of us is perfect so we must be open to enlightenment. Excellent entry -- good luck in Dane Ann's contest. I think she'll really like this one! Love, Carolyn