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Daily Routine

Morning sun rising Battling fierce rebellious clouds Perpetual feud

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Audrey Haick

Date: 9/26/2009 5:31:00 AM

I love this, Abe! So true to life and reality! Thanks for sharing your work for us to enjoy! Ladybug12

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/16/2009 8:00:00 PM

perpetual feud, I like it. we have really been having the battle here for about 2 weeks ,one minute it is raining and then it is sunny.

James Fraser

Date: 9/14/2009 1:34:00 PM

Another battle of the skies please's mine eye, excellent Abe>>James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/10/2009 2:57:00 AM

Amazing image of the sun fightin away the "rebellious clouds," Abe. Instead of "Abe," I would like to call you "Ace." You always hit the mark and I can't wait for your book to be released. This is an awesome haiku! Love you! Carolyn

Michael Jordan

Date: 9/5/2009 1:21:00 PM

Abe this is one of the best haiku's I believe I have read - One thing though bro in the haiku the first words shouldn't be capitalized - other than that this is perfect Abe - God Bless, mj

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/5/2009 6:19:00 AM

Daily Routine with a difference here..Daily routine in verses--well penned--Charma:)

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/4/2009 4:07:00 PM

So orginal Abe......who came out the winner?!! Do you need sunblock or an umbrella???!!

Savannah Rose Harper

Date: 9/4/2009 1:01:00 PM

nice how u put it love it!

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/4/2009 12:36:00 PM

Love that middle line...

Date: 9/4/2009 12:02:00 PM

Interesting perspective carried in just three lines. I really like the last line--leaving the reader with something to think about. Keep on writing! Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/4/2009 11:25:00 AM

Thats the way Abe tell it like it is. Love, Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/4/2009 11:20:00 AM

A beautiful routine it is, those morning rays fight to shine through a cumulous mass, a favorite sight of mine to see...Raul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/4/2009 10:42:00 AM

Very cleverly put. Sara

Brandee Augustus

Date: 9/4/2009 9:09:00 AM

Truth in such few words. Again I have been totally enjoying how everybody has been ending their poems so strongly. Very nice!