Daily Life

Daily Life

Daily Life is full of guilt and grief, even though it may not come to many peoples belief.
Living in this cold, harsh world, would be like punishing the most innocent little girl. 
People today want to fight anyone in sight, making them feel anger so tight, so tight that they want to kill making the other person’s blood spill.
God detests, but loves the people with guilt, even though they live on this amazing world that he built.
But then again people are still carrying the deadly knife, but then again that’s daily life.

-	Savannah Cain Butler
              03-02-2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Sparrow  Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 1:20 AM
Interesting choice of words. I enjoy the openness of this poem. People of any race gender or religion can relate. The last line is well written the cycle is painted well here.
Romaine Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 8:49 AM
Hey Savannah, a warm welcome to Poetry Soup. This is a deeply introspective piece from you. Deeply insightful and full of the harshness of daily life. Well written and beautifully expressed. Be Blessed, Neva
Andresen Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 12:05 PM
- Welcome to P Soup, with your first poem Savannah - Always nice to meet new "poets" - I look forward to more write from you in the future - Happy weekend :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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March 6, 2015 at 3:24 AM
SAVANNAH, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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March 3, 2015 at 4:43 AM
This is a good truth-filled poem. Good job and welcome to Poetry Soup. -JT
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