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I awake, inhaling life like a toddler encountering her first flower. I continue, devouring life like some teens with all-you-can-eat pizza. I retire, exhaling life in release like a belt post Thanksgiving’s meal. January 8, 2020

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2020 6:32:00 PM

haha, I love the ending on this. Congrats for the win

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/14/2020 2:01:00 PM

- Congratulations so much on your winning poem :) - // Anne-Lise

Silent One

Date: 1/12/2020 7:46:00 AM

sounds awesome... im not good at buffet or all you can eat though.. small appetite... Congrats on your placement in the contest..

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/9/2020 5:05:00 AM

Cindi, this has really awakened me and made me smile today!

Cindi Rockwell
Date: 1/9/2020 10:41:00 AM

Hurray! Art that inspires is always my goal!

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/8/2020 9:11:00 PM

Wow that's the way to live! Love your poem, Cindi.

Cindi Rockwell
Date: 1/9/2020 10:42:00 AM

Thank you!