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Daggers In My Heart

I tried again But the door Is still locked To his heart... Shades drawn to his eyes, Back turned to my plea, Walking away with his arms Around her...not me! Cynthia

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 8/28/2012 10:13:00 PM

Ouch. That's gottah cut keeper than any knife. He don't know what he's missing! Rrggg. Great one :) Always, Laura

Cynthia Alvez
Date: 8/31/2012 3:38:00 AM

"Things that hurt instruct!"...thank you for your comment. Cynthia

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 8/28/2012 8:40:00 PM

His loss!!! Excellent verse yet again!!!

Date: 8/28/2012 10:09:00 PM

Thank you! Absolutely his loss! Eventually I sent him a "Thank You Card"...lol Cynthia "Things that hurt, instruct"...

Dan Kearley

Date: 8/28/2012 7:02:00 PM

I guess its not ment to be :o( Just keep on looking.. :o)

Cynthia Alvez
Date: 9/4/2012 11:54:00 AM

Thank you Dan for your comment...I say, "There is always another sunrise!"