Cynthia Alvez Poet Free verse

Daggers In My Heart

I tried again
     But the door
      Is still locked
      To his heart...
Shades drawn to his eyes,
    Back turned to my plea,
Walking away with his arms
     Around her...not me!

Cynthia

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Laura Breidenthal August 28, 2012 at 10:13 PM Ouch. That's gottah cut keeper than any knife. He don't know what he's missing! Rrggg. Great one :) Always, Laura Cynthia Alvez August 31, 2012 at 3:38 AM "Things that hurt instruct!"...thank you for your comment. Cynthia

Pace Ink-U-Script August 28, 2012 at 8:40 PM His loss!!! Excellent verse yet again!!! August 28, 2012 at 10:09 PM Thank you! Absolutely his loss! Eventually I sent him a "Thank You Card"...lol Cynthia "Things that hurt, instruct"...

Dan Kearley August 28, 2012 at 7:02 PM I guess its not ment to be :o( Just keep on looking.. :o) Cynthia Alvez September 4, 2012 at 11:54 AM Thank you Dan for your comment...I say, "There is always another sunrise!"