Cheryl Hoffman Poet Rhyme

Daft-Labyrinth

Louise started walking through the hugh corn maze
the high hedges and turns the usual craze
occasionally she'd run into a dead end
but soon her labyrinth walk would be on the mend,

She felt like a detective looking for some clues
to help her get through and not be confused
using her gut feelings she felt she was almost free
astonished to find a hugh chunk of cheese.



10-18-17

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Mike Hauser October 21, 2017 at 8:01 AM Hahaha! Cheryl Hoffman October 21, 2017 at 9:31 AM Glad you got chuckle out of it Mike!~Che :)

Pat Adams October 18, 2017 at 9:11 PM I love this poem! I love cheese too! I'm sure I never would have ever thought to put it in a maze. a-MAZE-ing and a FAV for me. Thank you for sharing......80) Cheryl Hoffman October 19, 2017 at 8:12 AM Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Pat; glad you enjoyed it so much!~Che :)

Silent One October 18, 2017 at 2:50 PM Nice one Cheryl... Cheryl Hoffman October 18, 2017 at 7:20 PM Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Silent One; appreciate it!~Che :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 18, 2017 at 8:59 AM LOL awesome! :) sweet pen, my best to you for the contest! xomo Cheryl Hoffman October 18, 2017 at 7:07 PM Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Mo; glad you liked it!~Che :)