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Daft - Tomato Kisses

My son gave me a great grow-box to plant some veggies, watch them grow. Tomatoes chosen 'cause they're red; they grew quite fast...but then...oh no! Their vines at once became alive; and reached around to wrap my hips. Got kisses planted on both cheeks from succulent tomato lips! November 10, 2017 Contest: Surreal and Daft Sponsor: Kevin Shaw
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Dietrich Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 8:08 PM
I LOVE this one for the daft contest. That one isn't judged yet, is it ? HOpe this scores!
Haight Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 7:53 AM
Thanks, Andrea! Hope it is 'daft' enough! Hugs, Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 10:48 PM
A good one, Sandra--very creative and appealing! Janice
Haight Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 7:53 AM
Thank you so much, Janice! Hugs, Sandra
Rv Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 11:55 AM
Oh haha this is very cute; all the best in the contest!! Using 'planted' was very clever :)
Haight Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 7:52 AM
Thanks for your visit, Sneha, and uplifting comments! I am glad you caught the 'planted'! Hugs, Sandra
Daniel Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 9:35 AM
Ha ha, very creative, Sandra:)
Haight Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 7:51 AM
Thanks, Jo! I enjoyed creating this silly poem! Hugs, Sandra
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 11:06 PM
Giggles this is awesome :) my best to you in the contest!
Haight Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 8:34 AM
Hope it's daft enough, Maureen! Thanks for your positive comments! Hugs, Sandra
Vaso Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 10:10 PM
I loved this Sandra! Made me smile!
Haight Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 8:33 AM
Glad you enjoyed my silly poem, and it made you smile, Arthur! Sandra
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